Update patch set 2

Patch Set 2:

Thanks Sean for the quick review!

I still plan edits on the last section for sure and the whole thing needs proof reading as well. So I'm sure there are typos all over the place, but will do my best to fix them. :)

Thanks,
Ildikó

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