Update patch set 2

Patch Set 2: (5 comments) This is looking great. A few sentence structure suggestions - feel free to take or leave :) Patch-set: 2 Reviewer: Gerrit User 10278 <10278@4a232e18-c5a9-48ee-94c0-e04e7cca6543>
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+      "message": "I think this should be \"provide a solution to common problems\" or \"provide solutions to common problems\"",
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+      "message": "Could specify \"the three forces\" here just to reinforce the concept/definition.",
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+      "message": "would remove \"that\" \"ensure they are\" should be succinct enough",
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+      "message": "\"This step should be completed while the community is in the forming phase, as getting input and buy-in from everyone who is motivated to participate is key to long term success.\"\n\nSlightly rewritten",
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+      "message": "Is there a citation we could use here?",
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