Update patch set 7

Patch Set 7: Code-Review-1

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Today, I've tested PS7's document with AIO environment.  It worked correctly with kubectl is v1.9.2  :-)  I just checked to deploy VM instance.  There is small nits.

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"message": "How about updating the latest version? Following version is installed in Ubuntu16.04:\n\n- docker.io/xenial-updates,now 1.13.1-0ubuntu1~16.04.2\n- kubeadm/kubernetes-xenial,now 1.9.2-00\n- kubectl/kubernetes-xenial,now 1.9.2-00\n- kubelet/kubernetes-xenial,now 1.9.2-00\n- kubernetes-cni/kubernetes-xenial,now 0.6.0-00\n- helm version\n Client: \u0026version.Version{SemVer:\"v2.7.2\", GitCommit:\"8478fb4fc723885b155c924d1c8c410b7a9444e6\", GitTreeState:\"clean\"}\nServer: \u0026version.Version{SemVer:\"v2.7.2\",\nGitCommit:\"8478fb4fc723885b155c924d1c8c410b7a9444e6\", GitTreeState:\"clean\"}",
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"message": "I definitely encountered following error message( written in comment @229) in Ubuntu 16.04. I think it\u0027s better to add --ignore-preflight-errors\u003dall option to avoid an error.",
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"message": "There is a interaction to check gpg key. If a user copy\u0026paste this code-block, it will be failed. Therefore, it\u0027s better to split as follows:\n\nPre-configuration for ansible installation:\n\n.. code-block:: bash\n\n sudo apt update; sudo apt install -y software-properties-common\n sudo apt-add-repository ppa:ansible/ansible\n\nInstall ansible:\n\n.. code-block:: bash\n\n sudo apt install -y ansible python-pip python-dev",
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"message": "Today, it is increased 200. If the number of images less than 200, what should we do? I think there is no meaning to count the number of helm images without explaining bad case.\n\n$ ls | grep \".tgz\" | wc -l\n200",
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"message": "base_distro: ``ubuntu`` does not currently work. Use ``centos``.",
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"message": "I think it should be removed from #736-738 because this CLI doesn\u0027t work correctly now( or not supported yet). Please refer https://bugs.launchpad.net/python-openstackclient/+bug/1701079\n\nI also filed a bug into this launchpad.",
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