Refine release notes before kolla 2024.1 release

Change-Id: I7bdc670851f028238b083188384905947d51c0c1
2024-05-07 10:06:40 +02:00 · 2024-05-07 10:06:40 +02:00 · 76a470ca1d
commit 76a470ca1d
parent 26d95c182c
17 changed files with 32 additions and 33 deletions
--- a/releasenotes/notes/bump-proxysql-version-9e646a32db57a451.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/bump-proxysql-version-9e646a32db57a451.yaml
@ -1,3 +1,3 @@
 ---
 upgrade:
-  - ProxySQL version was increased to 2.6.x
+  - Upgraded ProxySQL to version ``2.6.x``.
--- a/releasenotes/notes/drop-freezer-06c0a19795156fe9.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/drop-freezer-06c0a19795156fe9.yaml
@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 ---
 upgrade:
  - |
-    Support for ``Freezer`` container images building have been dropped.
+    ``Freezer`` container images have been dropped.
--- a/releasenotes/notes/letsencrypt-lego-v4.15.0-de87cfdfaa13ad1c.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/letsencrypt-lego-v4.15.0-de87cfdfaa13ad1c.yaml
@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 ---
 upgrade:
  - |
-    Upgrade letsencrypt-lego from version v4.6.0 to version v4.15.0.
+    Upgraded letsencrypt-lego from version ``v4.6.0`` to version
-    Releasenotes because of a lot of changes: https://github.com/go-acme/lego/releases
+    ``v4.15.0``.
--- a/releasenotes/notes/move-curl-sources-d8fac9c8c57445cf.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/move-curl-sources-d8fac9c8c57445cf.yaml
@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 ---
 features:
  - |
-    Adds support for overriding Prometheus, Let's Encrypt lego and etcd source
+    Adds support for overriding Prometheus, Let's Encrypt lego, and etcd source
-    urls, versions and sha256 sums using ``kolla-build.conf``.
+    URLs, versions, and sha256 sums using ``kolla-build.conf``.
 upgrade:
  - |
-    Overriding Prometheus/Let's Encrypt lego and etcd source urls, versions
+    Overriding Prometheus, Let's Encrypt lego, and etcd source URLs, versions,
-    and sha256 sums using ``template-overrides.j2`` is not supported anymore.
+    and sha256 sums using ``template-overrides.j2`` is no longer supported.
-    Please migrate those overrides to ``kolla-build.conf``.
+    Please migrate these overrides to ``kolla-build.conf``.
--- a/releasenotes/notes/prometheus-alertmanager-0.27.0-6ac10d29c6911d80.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/prometheus-alertmanager-0.27.0-6ac10d29c6911d80.yaml
@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 ---
 upgrade:
  - |
-    Upgrade prometheus-alertmanager to version 0.27.0
+    Upgraded prometheus-alertmanager to version ``0.27.0``.
--- a/releasenotes/notes/prometheus-cadvisor-0.49.1-63d9bc4cd1be8a82.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/prometheus-cadvisor-0.49.1-63d9bc4cd1be8a82.yaml
@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 ---
 upgrade:
  - |
-    Upgrade prometheus-cadvisor from version 0.47.2 to version 0.49.1.
+    Upgraded prometheus-cadvisor from version ``0.47.2`` to version
-    Releasenotes from cadvisor because of a few changes: https://github.com/google/cadvisor/releases
+    ``0.49.1``.
--- a/releasenotes/notes/prometheus-elasticsearch-exporter-1.7.0-d53ba37689820cc9.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/prometheus-elasticsearch-exporter-1.7.0-d53ba37689820cc9.yaml
@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 ---
 upgrade:
  - |
-    Upgrade prometheus-elasticsearch-exporter to version 1.7.0
+    Upgraded prometheus-elasticsearch-exporter to version ``1.7.0``.
--- a/releasenotes/notes/prometheus-libvirt-exporter-inovex-acddd497258fe562.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/prometheus-libvirt-exporter-inovex-acddd497258fe562.yaml
@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 ---
 features:
  - |
-    Replace Tinkoff/libvirt-exporter with inovex/prometheus-libvirt-exporter.
+    Replaced Tinkoff/libvirt-exporter with inovex/prometheus-libvirt-exporter.
-    The Tinkoff/libvirt-exporter repository is archived. Latest
+    The Tinkoff/libvirt-exporter repository is archived, with its latest
-    release in December 2022. The inovex/prometheus-libvirt-exporter repository is an
+    release in December 2022. The inovex/prometheus-libvirt-exporter is an
-    active fork of zhangjianweibj/prometheus-libvirt-exporter that will become
+    active fork of zhangjianweibj/prometheus-libvirt-exporter and is expected
-    `a Prometheus community exporter in the future <https: //github.com/prometheus-community/community/issues/50>`_.
+    to become `a Prometheus community exporter in the future <https://github.com/prometheus-community/community/issues/50>`_.
--- a/releasenotes/notes/prometheus-memcached-exporter-0.14.2-1e017c7d392feff5.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/prometheus-memcached-exporter-0.14.2-1e017c7d392feff5.yaml
@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 ---
 upgrade:
  - |
-    Upgrade prometheus-memcached-exporter to version 0.14.2
+    Upgraded prometheus-memcached-exporter to version ``0.14.2``.
--- a/releasenotes/notes/prometheus-mtail-3.0.0-rc54-eda9c10283d9fc61.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/prometheus-mtail-3.0.0-rc54-eda9c10283d9fc61.yaml
@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 ---
 upgrade:
  - |
-    Upgrade prometheus-mtail to version 3.0.0-rc54.
+    Upgraded prometheus-mtail to version ``3.0.0-rc54``.
--- a/releasenotes/notes/prometheus-mysqld-exporter-0.15.1-d716e8d3dc1d3ba1.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/prometheus-mysqld-exporter-0.15.1-d716e8d3dc1d3ba1.yaml
@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 ---
 upgrade:
  - |
-    Upgrade prometheus-mysqld-exporter to version 0.15.1.
+    Upgraded prometheus-mysqld-exporter to version ``0.15.1``.
--- a/releasenotes/notes/prometheus-v2-server-2.50.1-119bdb84a9c25266.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/prometheus-v2-server-2.50.1-119bdb84a9c25266.yaml
@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 ---
 upgrade:
  - |
-    Upgrade prometheus-v2-server from version 2.48.0 to version 2.50.1.
+    Upgraded prometheus-v2-server from version ``2.48.0`` to version
-    Releasenotes: https://github.com/prometheus/prometheus/releases
+    ``2.50.1``.
--- a/releasenotes/notes/rabbitmq-3-13-56852b220fd50bc0.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/rabbitmq-3-13-56852b220fd50bc0.yaml
@ -1,6 +1,5 @@
 ---
 upgrade:
  - |
-    ``RabbitMQ`` version has been upgraded to ``3.13`` and ``Erlang``
+    ``RabbitMQ`` version has been upgraded to ``3.13``, and ``Erlang``
-    version has been upgraded to ``26.2`` (maximum supported by
+    version to ``26.2``, the maximum supported by ``RabbitMQ 3.13``.
    ``RabbitMQ 3.13``).
--- a/releasenotes/notes/reenable-ironic-inspector-in-bifrost.yml-5e01af1e96528c62.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/reenable-ironic-inspector-in-bifrost.yml-5e01af1e96528c62.yaml
@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
 fixes:
  - |
-    Re-enables ironic-inspector in bifrost for backwards compatibility.  See
+    Re-enabled ironic-inspector in bifrost for backwards compatibility. See
    `LP#2054685 <https://bugs.launchpad.net/kolla/+bug/2054685>`_ for more
    details.
--- a/releasenotes/notes/remove-prometheus-haproxy-exporter-22d5af88af7e4a9d.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/remove-prometheus-haproxy-exporter-22d5af88af7e4a9d.yaml
@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 ---
 upgrade:
  - |
-    HAProxy Prometheus metrics are now available directly from HAProxy. As
+    HAProxy Prometheus metrics are now available directly from HAProxy. Consequently,
-    such, the standalone Prometheus HAProxy exporter was archived in March
+    the standalone Prometheus HAProxy exporter, which was archived in March 2023, is
-    2023, is no longer supported and the Docker image has been removed from
+    no longer supported, and the Docker image has been removed from Kolla. For further
-    Kolla. For further details see `here
+    details, see `here
    <https://www.haproxy.com/blog/haproxy-exposes-a-prometheus-metrics-endpoint>`__.
--- a/releasenotes/notes/summary-json-file-96441e67076fc480.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/summary-json-file-96441e67076fc480.yaml
@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 ---
 features:
  - |
-    Adds support for writing the build summary to a JSON file specified via the
+    Added support for writing the build summary to a JSON file specified via the
    ``[DEFAULT] summary_json_file`` option.
--- a/releasenotes/notes/support-image-cross-compile-3b1dc348d742e96d.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/support-image-cross-compile-3b1dc348d742e96d.yaml
@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 ---
 features:
  - |
-    Add support for cross-compile. Enable creation of container images
+    Added support for cross-compilation. Enabled the creation of container images
    on emulated architectures.