Modify grammatical errors
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@ -178,13 +178,13 @@ returned from a detailed query is a valid sort key.
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Performance data was gathered by running on a simple devstack VM with 2GB
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memory. 5000 instances were inserted into the DB. The data shows that the
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sort time on the main data table is dwarfed (see first table below) when
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running a detailed query -- most of the time is spent querying the the other
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running a detailed query -- most of the time is spent querying the other
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tables for each item; therefore, the impact of the sort key on a detailed
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query is minimal.
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For example, the data below compares the processing time of a GET request for
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a non-detailed query to a detailed query with various limits using the default
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sort keys. The purpose of this table is to show the the processing time for a
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sort keys. The purpose of this table is to show the processing time for a
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detailed query is dominated by getting the additional details for each item.
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+-------+--------------------+----------------+---------------------------+
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@ -186,13 +186,13 @@ returned from a detailed query is a valid sort key.
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Performance data was gathered by running on a simple devstack VM with 2GB
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memory. 5000 instances were inserted into the DB. The data shows that the
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sort time on the main data table is dwarfed (see first table below) when
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running a detailed query -- most of the time is spent querying the the other
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running a detailed query -- most of the time is spent querying the other
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tables for each item; therefore, the impact of the sort key on a detailed
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query is minimal.
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For example, the data below compares the processing time of a GET request for
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a non-detailed query to a detailed query with various limits using the default
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sort keys. The purpose of this table is to show the the processing time for a
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sort keys. The purpose of this table is to show the processing time for a
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detailed query is dominated by getting the additional details for each item.
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+-------+--------------------+----------------+---------------------------+
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@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ Contradicting image property and flavor extra spec will result in failing to
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create instance.
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Any key data should be stored into Barbican as secrets and create the image
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property ``os_vtpm_keys`` containing the the comma separated references to the
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property ``os_vtpm_keys`` containing the comma separated references to the
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secrets (maximum 6 references, due to a length limitation - maximum 255
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characters), otherwise the instances will be spawned with no data stored in the
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vTPMs. Example value: UUID1,UUID2,UUID3
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@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ make it more compatible, as mentioned above.
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In addition /v2 endpoint thats powered by the v2.1 code should never accept
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any requests not accepted by /v2, and should only return /v2 like responses.
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Basically, it should always ignore any X-OpenStack-Nova-API-Version
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just like the the v2 code base does today.
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just like the v2 code base does today.
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For consistency, /v1.1 will be the same as /v2
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@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ Contradicting image property and flavor extra spec will result in failing to
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create instance.
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Any key data should be stored into Barbican as secrets and create the image
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property ``os_vtpm_keys`` containing the the comma separated references to the
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property ``os_vtpm_keys`` containing the comma separated references to the
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secrets (maximum 6 references, due to a length limitation - maximum 255
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characters), otherwise the instances will be spawned with no data stored in the
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vTPMs. Example value: UUID1,UUID2,UUID3
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@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ in the "VIFConfig" class shown earlier. This object corresponds to the
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data that can be provided in the <portprofile>...</portprofile> XML
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block. This is required data when a VIF is connected to OpenVSwitch,
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or when using one of the two VEPA modes. This could have been provided
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inline in the the VIFConfig subclasses, but there are a few cases
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inline in the VIFConfig subclasses, but there are a few cases
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where the same data is needed by different VIF types, so breaking it
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out into a separate object allows better reuse, without increasing
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the number of VIF types.
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@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ To use this in an existing installation with authx, adding 'allow
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rwx pool=images' to nova's ceph user capabilities is necessary. The
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'ceph auth caps' command can be used for this [1]. If these permissions
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are not updated, nova will continue using the existing full copy
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mechanism for instance snapshots because the the fast snapshot will fail
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mechanism for instance snapshots because the fast snapshot will fail
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and nova compute will fall back to the full copy method.
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Developer impact
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@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ aggregate.removehost.start, filterscheduler.select_destinations.end.
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The notification model will do basic validation on the content of the
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event_type e.g. enum for valid phases will be created.
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The value of the the priority field of the envelope on the wire can be selected
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The value of the priority field of the envelope on the wire can be selected
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from the predefined priorities in oslo.messaging (audit, debug, info, warn,
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error, critical, sample) except 'warning' (use warn instead).
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The notification model will do validation of the priority by providing an enum
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@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ Alternatives
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One alternative was considered around trying to eliminate races for IP resource
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between Nova and Neutron. It involved significantly more active maintenance of
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the reserved field on the resource provider and required that the the
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the reserved field on the resource provider and required that the
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allocation was conditionally recorded depending on the scenario.
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This method was rejected in favor of the current proposal for its complexity.
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