From 246d10e557bf60d5c3a0fffb6ec0551e53c52947 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Steve Lewis Date: Fri, 27 May 2016 10:21:44 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] DOCS: Clarify guidance for deploy hosts In an effort to clean up the language used, the recommended model has become less clear. This commit tries to provide guidance which is clearer than the original without resorting to the use of passive voice. Change-Id: I545c0aaf00dcc3114423075464c0282a282a3735 --- doc/source/install-guide/deploymenthost.rst | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/source/install-guide/deploymenthost.rst b/doc/source/install-guide/deploymenthost.rst index ae70be28f2..949f95c5cd 100644 --- a/doc/source/install-guide/deploymenthost.rst +++ b/doc/source/install-guide/deploymenthost.rst @@ -8,12 +8,12 @@ Chapter 2. Deployment host .. image:: figures/workflow-deploymenthost.png The OSA installation process recommends one deployment host. The -deployment host contains Ansible and orchestrates the OpenStack-Ansible installation -on the target hosts. Use one of the target hosts, preferably one of the -infrastructure variants, as the deployment host. To use a -deployment host as a target host, follow the steps in `Chapter 3, -Target hosts `_ on the deployment host. Use separate -deployment and target hosts. +deployment host contains Ansible and orchestrates the OpenStack-Ansible +installation on the target hosts. We recommend using separate deployment and +target hosts. You could alternatively use one of the target hosts, preferably +one of the infrastructure variants, as the deployment host. To use a +deployment host as a target host, follow the steps in `Chapter 3, Target +hosts `_ on the deployment host. Installing the operating system ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~