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The letter "a" should not go before a vowel.
"An" goes before the word that starts with a vowel.
 The word in this case was "OpenStack".
I also added the plural version for IP Addresses.
Since we are referring to multiple IP Addresses,
we need to make sure we add "addresses" after IP.
also removed additional white space before colon

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Shilla Saebi 2013-12-04 21:54:56 -05:00
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@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ connection = mysql://neutron:password@192.168.42.101/neutron
===== Configuring OpenStack Services to use Highly available OpenStack Networking Server
Your OpenStack services must now point their OpenStack Networking Server configuration to
the highly available, virtual cluster IP address -- rather than a
the highly available, virtual cluster IP address -- rather than an
OpenStack Networking server's physical IP address as you normally would.
For example, you should configure OpenStack Compute for using Highly Available OpenStack Networking Server in editing +nova.conf+ file :
@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ neutron_url = http://192.168.42.103:9696
You need to create the OpenStack Networking Server Endpoint with this IP.
NOTE : If you are using both private and public IP, you should create two Virtual IP and define your endpoint like this :
NOTE : If you are using both private and public IP addresses, you should create two Virtual IP addresses and define your endpoint like this:
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keystone endpoint-create --region $KEYSTONE_REGION --service-id $service-id --publicurl 'http://PUBLIC_VIP:9696/' --adminurl 'http://192.168.42.103:9696/' --internalurl 'http://192.168.42.103:9696/'
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