From 8c19a1546e6959b9cfef319f95b780a75b485a36 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: ihutchin Date: Wed, 2 Nov 2016 16:32:38 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Fix typos in persona descriptions. Change-Id: Ied5ab59e27b495f1aed6a5caeb177a468338bc63 --- .../ux-personas/cloud-ops.rst | 38 +++++++++---------- .../ux-personas/infrastructure-arch.rst | 4 +- 2 files changed, 21 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/contributor-guide/source/ux-ui-guidelines/ux-personas/cloud-ops.rst b/doc/contributor-guide/source/ux-ui-guidelines/ux-personas/cloud-ops.rst index d5f35ee008..1413f92300 100644 --- a/doc/contributor-guide/source/ux-ui-guidelines/ux-personas/cloud-ops.rst +++ b/doc/contributor-guide/source/ux-ui-guidelines/ux-personas/cloud-ops.rst @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ Rey performs the following tasks very frequently: including backup, disaster recovery, and platform services. * Usage tracking: Tracks the use that App Developers, Project Owners, and - Domain operators make of the cloud and optimizes the services accordingly. + Domain Operators make of the cloud and optimizes the services accordingly. * Update: Performs updates and verification of the OpenStack cloud. @@ -75,30 +75,30 @@ and updating the OpenStack cloud. The following pain point examples highlight the cases where progress can be impeded. This enables you to anticipate and compensate when preparing a project: -Rey has trouble finding information to help triage issues that can -prevent the cloud from running: +* Rey has trouble finding information to help triage issues that can + prevent the cloud from running: - "New users do not have the flexibility to spend weeks delving into - source code to figure out how to do common tasks, especially in the - areas of orchestration. Were it not for `ask.openstack.org `_ - and the hard work of many bloggers in the community, I would have a - significantly more difficult time trying to understand practical - uses of OpenStack functionality." + "New users do not have the flexibility to spend weeks delving into + source code to figure out how to do common tasks, especially in the + areas of orchestration. Were it not for `ask.openstack.org `_ + and the hard work of many bloggers in the community, I would have a + significantly more difficult time trying to understand practical + uses of OpenStack functionality." -Consistency between projects slows down progress: +* Inconsistency between projects slows down progress: - "All projects should strive to use the same standards—in code, - libraries used, file formats, and documentation. [We need] consistency - between different OpenStack projects and releases." + "All projects should strive to use the same standards—in code, + libraries used, file formats, and documentation. [We need] consistency + between different OpenStack projects and releases." - "It really boils down to having OpenStack act more like a single - initiative, versus a collection of projects." + "It really boils down to having OpenStack act more like a single + initiative, versus a collection of projects." -Building a community that listens and takes on feedback is also a goal: +* Building a community that listens and takes on feedback is also a goal: - "There’s still a bit of a gap between developers and operators. - Although that is narrowing, understanding operators’ pains in - certain areas is key in developing a better product as a whole." + "There’s still a bit of a gap between developers and operators. + Although that is narrowing, understanding operators’ pains in + certain areas is key in developing a better product as a whole." The scale of quotas presents significant obstacles for operators. Consider that Rey may need to manage over one thousand projects in a deployment. diff --git a/doc/contributor-guide/source/ux-ui-guidelines/ux-personas/infrastructure-arch.rst b/doc/contributor-guide/source/ux-ui-guidelines/ux-personas/infrastructure-arch.rst index 1b8f78eb3c..21023d3a7e 100644 --- a/doc/contributor-guide/source/ux-ui-guidelines/ux-personas/infrastructure-arch.rst +++ b/doc/contributor-guide/source/ux-ui-guidelines/ux-personas/infrastructure-arch.rst @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ Adrian performs the following tasks very frequently: processes, and the end users when recommending and installing cloud instances. -* Cloud planing: Defines and plans the cloud while considering hardware, +* Cloud planning: Defines and plans the cloud while considering hardware, platform choices, services, and scale. Key information @@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ important for the usability of your OpenStack development. Within a small organization, such as Rifkom or Nikishi University, Adrian might be required to assume some roles and responsibilities of a Cloud Operator or, more rarely, a Domain Operator. Within a larger organization, like CNBB -Securities, Adrian's tasks are performed by the team planing and implementing +Securities, Adrian's tasks are performed by the team planning and implementing the cloud instances. Your development