From 26380c8418d2ad3ab88d6fdc36fefd4c4e6e98e0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Megan Rossetti Date: Fri, 18 Apr 2014 16:20:44 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Clean up of module001 Change , to : when a list follows Changed few to just some because two items were listed Removed But as the start of the sentence and simplified the sentence Change-Id: Ic73fce6007145758fafcf8d4e98f891e8300b7ad --- doc/training-guides/module001-ch003-core-projects.xml | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/training-guides/module001-ch003-core-projects.xml b/doc/training-guides/module001-ch003-core-projects.xml index 92cde6f8b3..c9796ececb 100644 --- a/doc/training-guides/module001-ch003-core-projects.xml +++ b/doc/training-guides/module001-ch003-core-projects.xml @@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ with frequent development milestones. You can find a link to the current development release schedule here. - The Release Cycle is made of four major stages. + The Release Cycle is made of four major stages:
Various Projects under OpenStack @@ -207,15 +207,15 @@ questions and answers are also covered here. Core Projects Overview Let's take a dive into some of the technical aspects of - OpenStack. Its scalability and flexibility are a few of the + OpenStack. Its scalability and flexibility are just some of the awesome features that make it a rock-solid cloud computing platform. The OpenStack core projects serve the community and its demands. Being a cloud computing platform, OpenStack consists of many core and incubated projects which makes it really good - as an IaaS cloud computing platform/Operating System. But the - following points are the main components of OpenStack that are - necessary to be present in the cloud to call it an OpenStack + as an IaaS cloud computing platform/Operating System. The + following points are the main components + necessary to call it an OpenStack Cloud. Components of OpenStack OpenStack has a modular architecture with various code names