diff --git a/doc/install-guide/object-storage/section_object-storage-adding-proxy-server.xml b/doc/install-guide/object-storage/section_object-storage-adding-proxy-server.xml
index 00a7bfe536..37e5943cc1 100644
--- a/doc/install-guide/object-storage/section_object-storage-adding-proxy-server.xml
+++ b/doc/install-guide/object-storage/section_object-storage-adding-proxy-server.xml
@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@
         xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
         xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0">
                 <title>Add another proxy server</title>
-                <para>To provide additional reliability, and bandwidth
-                        to your cluster, you add proxy servers. You can
+                <para>To provide additional reliability and bandwidth
+                        to your cluster, you can add proxy servers. You can
                         set up an additional proxy node the same way
                         that you set up the first proxy node but with
                         additional configuration steps.</para>
@@ -16,10 +16,10 @@
                         strategies for load balancing. For example,
                         you could use round-robin DNS, or a software
                         or hardware load balancer (like pound) in
-                        front of the two proxies, and point your
-                        storage URL to the load balancer.</para>
-                <para>Configure an initial proxy node. Then, complete
-                        these steps to add proxy servers.</para>
+                        front of the two proxies. You can then point your
+                        storage URL to the load balancer, configure an initial
+                        proxy node and complete these steps to add proxy
+                        servers.</para>
                 <procedure>
                         <step>
                                 <para>Update the list of memcache