From 417752ef96330af3bee4a463f78d6bff55d4b857 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Deena Date: Fri, 11 Sep 2015 16:53:03 +1000 Subject: [PATCH] Removed colloquialism Removed colloquialism "choose your own OpenStack adventure". Change-Id: I799320af01e5bcf295ec88c9d3fcb22a16352cda Closes-Bug: #1494554 --- doc/install-guide/source/overview.rst | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/install-guide/source/overview.rst b/doc/install-guide/source/overview.rst index 4715b9f5ce..d445582576 100644 --- a/doc/install-guide/source/overview.rst +++ b/doc/install-guide/source/overview.rst @@ -129,9 +129,9 @@ Example architectures ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ OpenStack is highly configurable to meet different needs with various -compute, networking, and storage options. This guide enables you to -choose your own OpenStack adventure using a combination of core and -optional services. This guide uses the following example architectures: +compute, networking, and storage options. This guide presents several +combinations of core and optional services for you to choose from. This guide +uses the following example architectures: - Three-node architecture with OpenStack Networking (neutron) and optional nodes for Block Storage and Object Storage services. @@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ optional services. This guide uses the following example architectures: - The network node runs the Networking plug-in and several agents that provision tenant networks and provide switching, routing, :term:`NAT`, and - :term:`DHCP` services. This node also handles external (Internet) + :term:`DHCP` services. This node also handles external (internet) connectivity for tenant virtual machine instances. - The :term:`compute node` runs the :term:`hypervisor` portion of