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Fixes three small grammar errors in the ubuntu image guide

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1) Missing a space after some quotes on line 81
2) The word "paused" was duplicated on line 138
3) The word "instance" was used instead of "installation" on line 184

Change-Id: I583a6fc721b12018ae84da70d9f0d9ccab09f198
Closes-Bug: #1420477
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Stephen Jahl 2015-02-10 15:45:00 -05:00
parent 9467e94d4c
commit 418b76eaa5
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</simplesect>
<simplesect>
<title>Software selection: OpenSSH server</title>
<para>Choose "OpenSSH server"so that you will be able to SSH into the virtual machine when
<para>Choose "OpenSSH server" so that you will be able to SSH into the virtual machine when
it launches inside of an OpenStack cloud.</para>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
@ -135,7 +135,7 @@
<prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>virsh attach-disk --type cdrom --mode readonly trusty "" hdc</userinput>
<prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>virsh resume trusty</userinput></screen>
<note>
<para>In the previous example, you paused the instance paused, ejected the disk, and
<para>In the previous example, you paused the instance, ejected the disk, and
unpaused the instance. In theory, you could have ejected the disk at the
<guilabel>Installation complete</guilabel> screen. However, our testing
indicates that the Ubuntu installer locks the drive so that it cannot be ejected at
@ -181,7 +181,7 @@
<title>Clean up (remove MAC address details)</title>
<para>The operating system records the MAC address of the virtual Ethernet card in locations
such as <filename>/etc/udev/rules.d/70-persistent-net.rules</filename> during the
instance process. However, each time the image boots up, the virtual Ethernet card will
installation process. However, each time the image boots up, the virtual Ethernet card will
have a different MAC address, so this information must be deleted from the configuration
file.</para>
<para>There is a utility called <command>virt-sysprep</command>, that performs various