diff --git a/doc/install-guide/section_neutron-per-tenant-routers-with-private-networks.xml b/doc/install-guide/section_neutron-per-tenant-routers-with-private-networks.xml index e84527db1f..99b5353cf4 100644 --- a/doc/install-guide/section_neutron-per-tenant-routers-with-private-networks.xml +++ b/doc/install-guide/section_neutron-per-tenant-routers-with-private-networks.xml @@ -300,9 +300,9 @@ local_ip = 9.181.89.203 Start the Networking L2 agent The Networking Open vSwitch L2 agent can - be a service of operating system. The + be a service of the operating system. The command to start depends on your operating - systems. The following command runs the + system. The following command runs the service directly: # neutron-openvswitch-agent --config-file /etc/neutron/plugins/openvswitch/ovs_neutron_plugin.ini \ --config-file /etc/neutron/neutron.conf @@ -385,7 +385,7 @@ use_namespaces=True Start the L3 agent The Networking L3 agent can be a service - of operating system. The command to start + of the operating system. The command to start the service depends on your operating system. The following command starts the agent directly: @@ -481,11 +481,11 @@ export OS_AUTH_URL=http://controller:5000/v2.0/router:external true means that an external network is created - where you can create floating IP and router + where you can create the floating IP and router gateway port. - Add an IP on external network to br-ex. + Add an IP on the external network to br-ex. Because br-ex is the external network bridge, add an IP 30.0.0.100/24 to br-ex and ping the floating IP of the VM from our network @@ -680,7 +680,7 @@ rtt min/avg/max/mdev = 1.234/1.495/1.745/0.211 ms - Ping floating IP of the TenantA's server: + Ping the floating IP of TenantA's server: $ ping 30.0.0.2 PING 30.0.0.2 (30.0.0.2) 56(84) bytes of data. 64 bytes from 30.0.0.2: icmp_req=1 ttl=63 time=45.0 ms @@ -758,7 +758,7 @@ rtt min/avg/max/mdev = 0.898/15.621/45.027/20.793 ms provider:segmentation_id) 2 and 3. And also note the network IDs and subnet IDs because you use them to create VMs and - router. + the router. Create a server TenantC-VM1 for TenantC