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Don't use 'we'

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The document used "The admin or other privileged
user must include this option during network
creation or add it later. In this case, we can
add it to the existing provider provider network.".

To use "we" in this case should be avoided.

Change-Id: Idae1b9459bbbc6452891e9864362903653927457
Closes-Bug: #1679584
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David Rabel 2017-04-04 11:18:28 +02:00 committed by Alexandra Settle
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doc/install-guide/source/launch-instance-networks-selfservice.rst
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@ -168,9 +168,9 @@ on at least one self-service network and a gateway on a provider network.
The provider network must include the ``router:external`` option to The provider network must include the ``router:external`` option to
enable self-service routers to use it for connectivity to external networks enable self-service routers to use it for connectivity to external networks
such as the Internet. The ``admin`` or other privileged user must include this such as the Internet. The ``admin`` or other privileged user must include this
option during network creation or add it later. In this case, we already option during network creation or add it later. In this case, the
did that by providing the ``--external`` parameter when we created the ``router:external`` option was set by using the ``--external`` parameter
``provider`` provider network. when creating the ``provider`` network.
#. On the controller node, source the ``admin`` credentials to gain access to #. On the controller node, source the ``admin`` credentials to gain access to
admin-only CLI commands: admin-only CLI commands: