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Added commas where needed and made changes to some conjunctions to improve
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Ben Silverman
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xml:id="multi_site"> xml:id="multi_site">
<title>Multi-site</title> <title>Multi-site</title>
<para>A multi-site OpenStack environment is one in which services <para>A multi-site OpenStack environment is one in which services,
located in more than one data center are used to provide the located in more than one data center, are used to provide the
overall solution. Usage requirements of different multi-site overall solution. Usage requirements of different multi-site
clouds may vary widely, however they share some common needs. clouds may vary widely, but they share some common needs.
OpenStack is capable of running in a multi-region OpenStack is capable of running in a multi-region
configuration allowing some parts of OpenStack to effectively configuration. This enables some parts of OpenStack to
manage a grouping of sites as a single cloud. With some effectively manage a group of sites as a single cloud. With
careful planning in the design phase, OpenStack can act as an careful planning in the design phase, OpenStack can act as an
excellent multi-site cloud solution for a multitude of excellent multi-site cloud solution for a multitude of
needs.</para> needs.</para>