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* Improve general flow and text arrangement.
	* Prefix some services with 'The'.
	* Expand RHEL to Red Hat Enterprise Linux.

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Scott Radvan
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<abstract>
<para>The OpenStack™ system has several key projects that
are separate installations but can work together
depending on your cloud needs: OpenStack Compute,
OpenStack Object Storage, OpenStack Identity Service,
and OpenStack Image Service. You can install any of
these projects separately and then configure them
either as standalone or connected entities. <phrase
os="ubuntu">This guide walks through an
<para>The OpenStack™ system consists of several key projects that
are separately installed but can work together depending on your
cloud needs: these projects include OpenStack Compute,
OpenStack Object Storage, the OpenStack Identity Service,
and the OpenStack Image Service. You can install any of these
projects separately and then configure them either as standalone
or connected entities.
<phrase os="ubuntu">This guide walks through an
installation using packages available through
Ubuntu 12.04 (LTS).</phrase>
<phrase os="rhel;centos;fedora">This guide shows you
how to install OpenStack by using packages
available through Fedora 19 as well as on RHEL and
derivatives through the EPEL repository.</phrase>
available through Fedora 19 as well as on
Red Hat Enterprise Linux and its derivatives via
the EPEL repository.</phrase>
<phrase os="opensuse">This guide shows you
how to install OpenStack by using packages
on openSUSE 12.3 through the Open Build Service Cloud
repository.</phrase>
It offers explanations for the configuration choices
and provides sample configuration files.</para>
Additionally, explanations of configuration options
and sample configuration files are included.</para>
</abstract>
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