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any organization. Cost is an important criterion
as general purpose clouds are considered the baseline
from which all other cloud architecture environments
derive. General purpose cloud do not always provide
derive. General purpose clouds do not always provide
the most cost-effective environment for specialized
applications or situations. Unless razor-thin margins and costs have
been mandated as a critical factor, cost should not be
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<term>Internal consumption (private) cloud</term>
<listitem>
<para>Organizations need to determine if it is logical to
create their own clouds internally. Using private cloud,
create their own clouds internally. Using a private cloud,
organizations are able to maintain complete control over
the architectural and cloud components.</para>
architectural and cloud components.</para>
<note>
<para>Users will want to combine
using the internal cloud with access to an external
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to asset, threat, and vulnerability risk assessment
matrices. For cloud domains that require increased
computer security, network security, or information
security, general purpose cloud is not considered an
security, a general purpose cloud is not considered an
appropriate choice.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>