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process of installing a virtual machine. It uses a
predefined set of kickstart (Red Hat-based systems) and
preseed files (Debian-based systems) for operating systems
that it supports, and it call also be using to create
that it supports, and it can also be used to create
Microsoft Windows images. On Fedora, install Oz with yum:<screen><prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>yum install oz</userinput></screen><note>
<para>As of this writing, there are no Oz packages for
Ubuntu, so you will need to either install from
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in the <literal>packages</literal> section of the
file.</para>
<para>After Oz does the initial OS install using the kickstart
file, it will customize the image by doing an update and
removing any reference to the eth0 device that libvirt
creates while Oz was doing the customizing, as specified
file, it customizes the image by doing an update. It also
removes any reference to the eth0 device that libvirt
creates while Oz does the customizing, as specified
in the <literal>command</literal> section of the XML
file.</para>
<para>To run this, do, as root:</para>