From 7183f743a7ec83661cc719d010a8bc6d66c34cf8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Andreas Jaeger Date: Fri, 25 Jul 2014 17:24:36 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Arch Design: Do not abbreviate OS in headings Use 'operating system' in a consistent way in titles and remove the only two usages of OS. Change-Id: I5cbb6b6223820eedfdb8042dce14b2f439fc7d1c --- .../section_architecture_compute_focus.xml | 38 ++++++++----------- .../section_architecture_general_purpose.xml | 25 ++++++------ 2 files changed, 29 insertions(+), 34 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/arch-design/compute_focus/section_architecture_compute_focus.xml b/doc/arch-design/compute_focus/section_architecture_compute_focus.xml index 91467b4348..70c8787802 100644 --- a/doc/arch-design/compute_focus/section_architecture_compute_focus.xml +++ b/doc/arch-design/compute_focus/section_architecture_compute_focus.xml @@ -535,28 +535,22 @@
- OS and hypervisor - The selection of OS and hypervisor has a significant impact - on - the end point design. Selecting a particular operating - system and - hypervisor could affect server hardware selection. - For example, a - selected combination needs to be supported on - the selected hardware. - Ensuring the storage hardware selection - and topology supports the - selected operating system and - hypervisor combination should also be - considered. - Additionally, make sure that the networking hardware - selection - and topology will work with the chosen operating system and - hypervisor combination. For example, if the design uses Link - Aggregation Control Protocol (LACP), the hypervisor needs to - support - it. - + Operating system and hypervisor + + The selection of operating system (OS) and hypervisor has + a significant impact on the end point design. Selecting a + particular operating system and hypervisor could affect + server hardware selection. For example, a selected + combination needs to be supported on the selected + hardware. Ensuring the storage hardware selection and + topology supports the selected operating system and + hypervisor combination should also be considered. + Additionally, make sure that the networking hardware + selection and topology will work with the chosen operating + system and hypervisor combination. For example, if the + design uses Link Aggregation Control Protocol (LACP), the + hypervisor needs to support it. + Some areas that could be impacted by the selection of OS and hypervisor include: diff --git a/doc/arch-design/generalpurpose/section_architecture_general_purpose.xml b/doc/arch-design/generalpurpose/section_architecture_general_purpose.xml index fb94459be3..cd2e76555b 100644 --- a/doc/arch-design/generalpurpose/section_architecture_general_purpose.xml +++ b/doc/arch-design/generalpurpose/section_architecture_general_purpose.xml @@ -520,18 +520,19 @@
- OS and hypervisor - The selection of OS and hypervisor has a tremendous impact - on the overall design. Selecting a particular operating system - and hypervisor can also directly affect server hardware - selection. It is recommended to make sure the storage hardware - selection and topology support the selected operating system - and hypervisor combination. Finally, it is important to ensure - that the networking hardware selection and topology will work - with the chosen operating system and hypervisor combination. - For example, if the design uses Link Aggregation Control - Protocol (LACP), the OS and hypervisor both need to support - it. + Operating system and hypervisor + + The selection of operating system (OS) and hypervisor has a + tremendous impact on the overall design. Selecting a particular + operating system and hypervisor can also directly affect server + hardware selection. It is recommended to make sure the storage + hardware selection and topology support the selected operating + system and hypervisor combination. Finally, it is important to + ensure that the networking hardware selection and topology will + work with the chosen operating system and hypervisor + combination. For example, if the design uses Link Aggregation + Control Protocol (LACP), the OS and hypervisor both need to + support it. Some areas that could be impacted by the selection of OS and hypervisor include: