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<title>OpenStack Training Guides Are Under Construction</title> <title>OpenStack Training Guides Are Under Construction</title>
<para>We need your help! This is a community driven project to provide the user group community <para>We need your help! This is a community driven project to provide the user group community
access to OpenStack training materials. We cannot make this work without your help.</para> access to OpenStack training materials. We cannot make this work without your help.</para>
<para>There are few ways to get involved. The easiest way is to use the training guides. Look at <para>There are a few ways to get involved. The easiest way is to use the training guides. Look at
the end of each section and you will see the Submit a Bug link. When you find something that can the end of each section and you will see the Submit a Bug link. When you find something that can
be improved or fixed, submit a bug by clicking on the link.</para> be improved or fixed, submit a bug by clicking on the link.</para>
<para>If you want to get involved with the effort around OpenStack community training, read on, <para>If you want to get involved with the effort around OpenStack community training, read on,
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<listitem> <listitem>
<formalpara><title>Attending a user group using the training materials</title> <formalpara><title>Attending a user group using the training materials</title>
<para>The OpenStack community training started at the SFBay OpenStack User Group. More <para>The OpenStack community training started at the SFBay OpenStack User Group. More
information this user group and others using the training guides on the <link information on this user group and others using the training guides on the <link
xlink:href="https://wiki.openstack.org/wiki/OpenStackUserGroups">OpenStack User Groups xlink:href="https://wiki.openstack.org/wiki/OpenStackUserGroups">OpenStack User Groups
page</link>.</para> page</link>.</para>
</formalpara> </formalpara>
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</listitem> </listitem>
<listitem> <listitem>
<formalpara> <formalpara>
<title>Helping to create the training pages</title> <title>Help create the training pages</title>
<para> <para>
<itemizedlist> <itemizedlist>
<listitem> <listitem>
<para>We are currently working on creating the Associate Training Guide. It is the <para>We are currently working on creating the Associate Training Guide. It is the
first of four training guides. We are using the Install Guide, Administration first of four training guides. We are using the Install Guide, Administration
Guides, Developer Documentation, and Aptira supplied content as the sources for Guides, Developer Documentation, and Aptira supplied content as the sources for
most of the Associate Training Guide. The basic idea is we use XML include most of the Associate Training Guide. The basic idea is that we use XML include
statements to actually use the source content to create new pages. We aim to use statements to actually use the source content to create new pages. We aim to use
as much of the material as possible from existing documentation. By doing this as much of the material as possible from existing documentation. By doing this
we reuse and improve the existing docs. The topics in the Associate Training we reuse and improve the existing docs. The topics in the Associate Training
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to go, you can assign some work to yourself. Go to the <link to go, you can assign some work to yourself. Go to the <link
xlink:href="https://trello.com/board/openstack-training/51d6e5fee37248fd5b003de9" xlink:href="https://trello.com/board/openstack-training/51d6e5fee37248fd5b003de9"
>Training Trello/KanBan storyboard</link> and assign a card / user story from >Training Trello/KanBan storyboard</link> and assign a card / user story from
the Sprint Backlog to yourself. If you don't have a Trello account, no problem, the Sprint Backlog to yourself. If you do not have a Trello account, no problem,
just create one. Email seanrob@yahoo-inc.com and you will have access.</para> just create one. Email seanrob@yahoo-inc.com and you will have access.</para>
</listitem> </listitem>
<listitem> <listitem>