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Use Internet in a consistent way in all guides.

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doc/admin-guide-cloud/compute/section_compute-image-mgt.xml
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<term>HTTP</term>
<listitem>
<para>OpenStack Image Service can read virtual machine
images that are available on the internet using
images that are available on the Internet using
HTTP. This store is read only.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>

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doc/arch-design/compute_focus/section_tech_considerations_compute_focus.xml
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operation of the cloud, for example API calls. Public cloud
providers and private cloud providers who do not have
stringent controls on instance use or who allow unrestricted
internet access to instances should consider this domain to be
Internet access to instances should consider this domain to be
untrusted. Private cloud providers may want to consider this
network as internal and therefore trusted only if they have
controls in place to assert that they trust instances and all

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doc/arch-design/generalpurpose/section_tech_considerations_general_purpose.xml
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operation of the cloud, such as API calls. Public cloud
providers and private cloud providers who do not have
stringent controls on instance use or who allow unrestricted
internet access to instances should consider this domain to be
Internet access to instances should consider this domain to be
untrusted. Private cloud providers may want to consider this
network as internal and therefore trusted only if they have
controls in place to assert that they trust instances and all

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doc/arch-design/hybrid/section_tech_considerations_hybrid.xml
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cloud providers that are used in a hybrid cloud configuration
which an organization does not control and private cloud
providers who do not have stringent controls on instance use
or who allow unrestricted internet access to instances should
or who allow unrestricted Internet access to instances should
consider this domain to be untrusted. Private cloud providers
may consider this network as internal and therefore trusted
only if there are controls in place to assert that instances

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doc/image-guide/section_ubuntu-example.xml
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<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
<section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0" xml:id="ubuntu-image">
<section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
version="5.0"
xml:id="ubuntu-image">
<title>Example: Ubuntu image</title>
<para>This example installs a Ubuntu 14.04 (Trusty Tahr) image. To create an image for a
different version of Ubuntu, follow these steps with the noted differences.</para>
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<title>Automatic updates</title>
<para>The Ubuntu installer will ask how you want to manage upgrades on your system. This
option depends on your specific use case. If your virtual machine instances will be
connected to the internet, we recommend "Install security updates automatically".</para>
connected to the Internet, we recommend "Install security updates automatically".</para>
</simplesect>
<simplesect>
<title>Software selection: OpenSSH server</title>

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doc/install-guide/ch_overview.xml
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and several layer-3 agents that provision and operate tenant
networks. Layer-2 services include provisioning of virtual
networks and tunnels. Layer-3 services include routing,
<glossterm baseform="Network Address Translation (NAT)">NAT</glossterm>
, and <glossterm>DHCP</glossterm>. This node also handles
external (internet) connectivity for tenant virtual machines
<glossterm baseform="Network Address Translation (NAT)">NAT</glossterm>,
and <glossterm>DHCP</glossterm>. This node also handles
external (Internet) connectivity for tenant virtual machines
or instances.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>

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doc/install-guide/section_basics-networking-neutron.xml
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</section>
<section xml:id="basics-neutron-networking-verify">
<title>Verify connectivity</title>
<para>We recommend that you verify network connectivity to the internet
<para>We recommend that you verify network connectivity to the Internet
and among the nodes before proceeding further.</para>
<procedure>
<step>
<para>From the <emphasis>controller</emphasis> node,
<command>ping</command> a site on the internet:</para>
<command>ping</command> a site on the Internet:</para>
<screen><prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>ping -c 4 openstack.org</userinput>
<computeroutput>PING openstack.org (174.143.194.225) 56(84) bytes of data.
64 bytes from 174.143.194.225: icmp_seq=1 ttl=54 time=18.3 ms
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</step>
<step>
<para>From the <emphasis>network</emphasis> node,
<command>ping</command> a site on the internet:</para>
<command>ping</command> a site on the Internet:</para>
<screen><prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>ping -c 4 openstack.org</userinput>
<computeroutput>PING openstack.org (174.143.194.225) 56(84) bytes of data.
64 bytes from 174.143.194.225: icmp_seq=1 ttl=54 time=18.3 ms
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</step>
<step>
<para>From the <emphasis>compute</emphasis> node,
<command>ping</command> a site on the internet:</para>
<command>ping</command> a site on the Internet:</para>
<screen><prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>ping -c 4 openstack.org</userinput>
<computeroutput>PING openstack.org (174.143.194.225) 56(84) bytes of data.
64 bytes from 174.143.194.225: icmp_seq=1 ttl=54 time=18.3 ms

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doc/install-guide/section_basics-networking-nova.xml
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</section>
<section xml:id="basics-networking-nova-verify">
<title>Verify connectivity</title>
<para>We recommend that you verify network connectivity to the internet
<para>We recommend that you verify network connectivity to the Internet
and among the nodes before proceeding further.</para>
<procedure>
<step>
<para>From the <emphasis>controller</emphasis> node,
<command>ping</command> a site on the internet:</para>
<command>ping</command> a site on the Internet:</para>
<screen><prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>ping -c 4 openstack.org</userinput>
<computeroutput>PING openstack.org (174.143.194.225) 56(84) bytes of data.
64 bytes from 174.143.194.225: icmp_seq=1 ttl=54 time=18.3 ms
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</step>
<step>
<para>From the <emphasis>compute</emphasis> node,
<command>ping</command> a site on the internet:</para>
<command>ping</command> a site on the Internet:</para>
<screen><prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>ping -c 4 openstack.org</userinput>
<computeroutput>PING openstack.org (174.143.194.225) 56(84) bytes of data.
64 bytes from 174.143.194.225: icmp_seq=1 ttl=54 time=18.3 ms

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</figure>
<section xml:id="neutron_initial-external-network">
<title>External network</title>
<para>The external network typically provides internet access for
your instances. By default, this network only allows internet
<para>The external network typically provides Internet access for
your instances. By default, this network only allows Internet
access <emphasis>from</emphasis> instances using
<glossterm>Network Address Translation (NAT)</glossterm>. You can
enable internet access <emphasis>to</emphasis> individual instances
enable Internet access <emphasis>to</emphasis> individual instances
using a <glossterm>floating IP address</glossterm> and suitable
<glossterm>security group</glossterm> rules. The <literal>admin</literal>
tenant owns this network because it provides external network

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<title>Create initial network</title>
<para>Before launching your first instance, you must create the necessary
virtual network infrastructure to which the instance will connect.
This network typically provides internet access
<emphasis>from</emphasis> instances. You can enable internet access
This network typically provides Internet access
<emphasis>from</emphasis> instances. You can enable Internet access
<emphasis>to</emphasis> individual instances using a
<glossterm>floating IP address</glossterm> and suitable
<glossterm>security group</glossterm> rules. The <literal>admin</literal>