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In arch-design/content/arch-design-architecture-multiple-site.html
under Openstack services architecture and networking sections.

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<section xml:id="openstack-services-architecture">
<title>OpenStack services architecture</title>
<para>The OpenStack Identity service, which is used by all other
<para>The Identity service, which is used by all other
OpenStack components for authorization and the catalog of
service endpoints, supports the concept of regions. A region
is a logical construct used to group OpenStack services in
close proximity to one another. The concept of
regions is flexible; it may can contain OpenStack service
regions is flexible; it may contain OpenStack service
endpoints located within a distinct geographic region or regions.
It may be smaller in scope, where a region is a single rack
within a data center, with multiple regions existing in adjacent
racks in the same data center.</para>
<para>The majority of OpenStack components are designed to run
within the context of a single region. The OpenStack Compute
within the context of a single region. The Compute
service is designed to manage compute resources within a region,
with support for subdivisions of compute resources by using
availability zones and cells. The OpenStack Networking service
availability zones and cells. The Networking service
can be used to manage network resources in the same broadcast
domain or collection of switches that are linked. The OpenStack
Block Storage service controls storage resources within a region
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HTTP caching layer, use a caching layer like Memcache to cache
objects between the proxy and storage nodes.</para>
<para>If the cloud is designed with a separate Object Storage
Service endpoint made available in each region, applications are
service endpoint made available in each region, applications are
required to handle synchronization (if desired) and other management
operations to ensure consistency across the nodes. For some
applications, having multiple Object Storage Service endpoints
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</section>
<section xml:id="arch-networking-multiple">
<title>Networking</title>
<para>When connecting multiple regions together there are several design
<para>When connecting multiple regions together, there are several design
considerations. The overlay network technology choice determines how
packets are transmitted between regions and how the logical network
and addresses present to the application. If there are security or
regulatory requirements, encryption should be implemented to secure
the traffic between regions. For networking inside a region, the
overlay network technology for tenant networks is equally important.
The overlay technology and the network traffic of an application
generates or receives can be either complementary or be at cross
purpose. For example, using an overlay technology for an application
The overlay technology and the network traffic that an application
generates or receives can be either complementary or serve cross
purposes. For example, using an overlay technology for an application
that transmits a large amount of small packets could add excessive
latency or overhead to each packet if not configured
properly.</para>