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added a comma, changed service to component

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Added a comma which I think will improve the flow of the
first sentence. Changed service to component, as the follow-up
sentence uses the word service too, and it sounds slightly awkward.

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2015-02-20 16:15:06 -07:00
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doc/install-guide/ch_networking.xml
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xml:id="ch_networking"> xml:id="ch_networking">
<title>Add a networking component</title> <title>Add a networking component</title>
<para>This chapter explains how to install and configure either <para>This chapter explains how to install and configure either
OpenStack Networking (neutron) or the legacy <systemitem OpenStack Networking (neutron), or the legacy <systemitem
class="service">nova-network</systemitem> networking service. class="service">nova-network</systemitem> component.
The <systemitem class="service">nova-network</systemitem> service The <systemitem class="service">nova-network</systemitem> service
enables you to deploy one network type per instance and is enables you to deploy one network type per instance and is
suitable for basic network functionality. OpenStack Networking suitable for basic network functionality. OpenStack Networking