Fix user guide typos and text
Updated ubuntu user to format with <literal> in /openstack-manuals/doc/user-guide/section_dashboard_launch_instances.xml, and changed "username" to "user name." Updated "etc" to "and so on," changed "Heat" to "Orchestration," and changed intro paragraph about Orchestration to match what's on the OpenStack getting started site in: /openstack-manuals/doc/user-guide/section_dashboard_stacks.xml Change-Id: Ie33d9a31c9d8b1ada31bf1c226ccb92eb0c08f1f
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xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0"
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xml:id="dashboard_launch_instances">
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<title>Launch and manage instances</title>
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<para>Instances are virtual machines that run inside the cloud.</para>
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<para>You can <link linkend="dashboard_launch_instances_from_image">launch
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an instance from an OpenStack image</link>. The OpenStack
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<para>Instances are virtual machines that run inside the
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cloud.</para>
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<para>You can <link
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linkend="dashboard_launch_instances_from_image">launch an
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instance from an OpenStack image</link>. The OpenStack
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Image Service provides a pool of images that are accessible to
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members of different projects.</para>
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<para>You can also
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<link linkend="dashboard_launch_instances_from_volume">launch
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an instance from an image that you have copied to a
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<para>You can also <link
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linkend="dashboard_launch_instances_from_volume">launch an
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instance from an image that you have copied to a
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persistent volume</link>. The instance boots from the
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volume, which is provided by <systemitem class="service"
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>nova-volume</systemitem> through iSCSI. When you launch
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<literal>xvda</literal> for Xen images.</para>
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</listitem>
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</itemizedlist>
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<?hard-pagebreak?>
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<?hard-pagebreak?>
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<xi:include
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href="section_dashboard_launch_instances_from_image.xml"/>
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<?hard-pagebreak?>
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<para>To SSH into your instance, you use the downloaded
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keypair file.</para>
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<note>
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<para>The username is ubuntu for the Ubuntu cloud images
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on TryStack.</para>
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<para>The user name is <literal>ubuntu</literal> for the
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Ubuntu cloud images on TryStack.</para>
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</note>
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<procedure>
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<step>
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</section>
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<section xml:id="track_usage">
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<title>Track usage for instances</title>
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<para>You can track usage for instances for each tenant, also known as a project. You
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can track costs per month by showing metrics like number
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of VCPUs, disks, RAM, and uptime for all your
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instances.</para>
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<para>You can track usage for instances for each tenant, also
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known as a project. You can track costs per month by
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showing metrics like number of VCPUs, disks, RAM, and
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uptime for all your instances.</para>
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<procedure>
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<step>
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<para>Log in to the dashboard, choose a
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project, and click the
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<guilabel>Overview</guilabel> category.</para>
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<para>Log in to the dashboard, choose a project, and
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click the <guilabel>Overview</guilabel>
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category.</para>
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</step>
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<step>
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<para>To query the instance usage for a month, select
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<title>Create instance snapshots</title>
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<procedure>
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<step>
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<para>Log in to the dashboard, choose a
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project, and click the
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<guilabel>Instances</guilabel>
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<para>Log in to the dashboard, choose a project, and
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click the <guilabel>Instances</guilabel>
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category.</para>
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</step>
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<step>
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<title>Manage an instance</title>
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<procedure>
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<step>
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<para>Log in to the dashboard, choose a
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project, and click the
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<guilabel>Instances</guilabel>
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<para>Log in to the dashboard, choose a project, and
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click the <guilabel>Instances</guilabel>
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category.</para>
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</step>
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<step>
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<para>In the <guilabel>More</guilabel> drop-down list
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in the <guilabel>Actions</guilabel> column, select
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the state.</para>
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<para>You can resize or rebuild an instance. You can also choose to view the instance console log. Depending on the current state of the instance, you can choose to pause, resume, suspend, soft or
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<para>You can resize or rebuild an instance. You can
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also choose to view the instance console log.
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Depending on the current state of the instance,
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you can choose to pause, resume, suspend, soft or
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hard reboot, or terminate an instance.</para>
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</step>
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</procedure>
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xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0"
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xml:id="dashboard_stacks">
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<title>Launch and manage stacks</title>
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<para>Heat is a service used to orchestrate multiple composite
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cloud applications using the AWS CloudFormation template
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format, through both an OpenStack-native ReST API and a
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CloudFormation-compatible Query API.</para>
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<para>The purpose of Heat is to provide a template based
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orchestration for describing a cloud application by executing
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appropriate OpenStack API calls to generate running cloud
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applications, integrate other core components of OpenStack
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into a one-file template system. The templates allow creation
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of most OpenStack resource types such as instances, floating
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ips, volumes, security groups, users, etc.</para>
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<para>Orchestration is a service used to orchestrate
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multiple composite cloud applications using the AWS
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CloudFormation template format, through both an
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OpenStack-native REST API and a CloudFormation-compatible
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Query API.</para>
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<para>The flexible template language enables application
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developers to describe and automate the deployment of
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infrastructure, services, and applications. The templates
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allow creation of most OpenStack resource types such as
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instances, floating ips, volumes, security groups, users, and
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so on.</para>
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<section xml:id="dashboard_create_stacks">
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<title>Launch a stack</title>
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<procedure>
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<step>
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<para>Log in to the dashboard, choose a
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project, and click <guibutton>Stacks</guibutton>
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in the <guilabel>Orchestration</guilabel>
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<para>Log in to the dashboard, choose a project, and
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click <guibutton>Stacks</guibutton> in the
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<guilabel>Orchestration</guilabel>
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category.</para>
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</step>
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<step>
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