diff --git a/doc/arch-design/generalpurpose/section_architecture_general_purpose.xml b/doc/arch-design/generalpurpose/section_architecture_general_purpose.xml index b4b34fdd73..207fe02cf7 100644 --- a/doc/arch-design/generalpurpose/section_architecture_general_purpose.xml +++ b/doc/arch-design/generalpurpose/section_architecture_general_purpose.xml @@ -67,10 +67,6 @@ Operations Per Second (IOPS) - - - - Server hardware is evaluated around four conflicting dimensions. @@ -545,7 +541,7 @@ is important to consider the networking implications on API availability. In order to ensure that the APIs, and potentially other services in the cloud are highly - available, we recommend you design load balancing + available, we recommend you design a load balancing solution within the network architecture to accommodate for these requirements. @@ -806,7 +802,7 @@
Network-focused workloads - In a network-focused OpenStack cloud some design choices can + In a network-focused OpenStack cloud, some design choices can improve the performance of these types of workloads. Network-focused workloads have extreme demands on network bandwidth and services that require specialized consideration