diff --git a/doc/image-guide/ch_openstack_images.xml b/doc/image-guide/ch_openstack_images.xml
index ac23385618..77ccdb9619 100644
--- a/doc/image-guide/ch_openstack_images.xml
+++ b/doc/image-guide/ch_openstack_images.xml
@@ -11,13 +11,12 @@
For a Linux-based image to have full functionality in an
OpenStack Compute cloud, there are a few requirements. For
- some of these, the requirement can be fulfilled by installing
+ some of these, you can fulfill the requirement by installing
the cloud-init package. Read
this section before you create your own image to be sure that
- the image supports the OpenStack features that you plan on
- using.
+ the image supports the OpenStack features that you plan to use.
Disk partitions and resize root partition on boot
@@ -227,7 +226,8 @@
You do not need a /boot
partition unless your image is an older Linux
distribution that requires that
- /boot is not managed by LVM.
+ /boot is not managed by
+ LVM.
@@ -419,12 +419,12 @@ done
variable:
GRUB_CMDLINE_LINUX_DEFAULT="console=ttyS0"Next, update the grub configuration. On Debian-based
- operating-systems such as Ubuntu,
- do:$sudo update-grub
- On Fedora-based systems such as RHEL and CentOS,
- do:$sudo grub2-mkconfig -o /boot/grub2/grub.cfg
+ operating-systems such as Ubuntu, run this command:
+ #update-grub
+ On Fedora-based systems, such as RHEL and CentOS, and on
+ openSUSE, run this command:
+ #grub2-mkconfig -o /boot/grub2/grub.cfg
-
Paravirtualized Xen support in the kernel (Xen
hypervisor only)
@@ -514,9 +514,9 @@ done
To see how the settings affect the deletion of a running
instance, check the directory where the images are
stored:
- $sudo ls -lash /var/lib/nova/instances/_base/
- Then look for the identifier in
- /var/log/compute/compute.log:
+ #ls -lash /var/lib/nova/instances/_base/
+ In the /var/log/compute/compute.log
+ file, look for the identifier:2012-02-18 04:24:17 41389 WARNING nova.virt.libvirt.imagecache [-] Unknown base file: /var/lib/nova/instances/_base/06a057b9c7b0b27e3b496f53d1e88810
a0d1d5d3_20
2012-02-18 04:24:17 41389 INFO nova.virt.libvirt.imagecache [-] Removable base files: /var/lib/nova/instances/_base/06a057b9c7b0b27e3b496f53d1e88810