openstack/openstack-manuals
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Fix small errors with several documents

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fixes bug 1087067

As in the bug report, there are three issues with these documents:

1. one liner for glance
2. use raw links to the scripts on github
3. there is no novnc service to restart

which this patch fixes

Change-Id: I8366cfc1f0f044fdcc79670960e04be6996340db
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Tom Fifield
2012-12-06 13:35:59 +11:00
parent d7957659d1
commit ae65b27bbd
5 changed files with 8 additions and 8 deletions
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doc/src/docbkx/basic-install/src/basic-install_controller-glance.xml
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@@ -28,9 +28,9 @@ rabbit_password = password</userinput></screen></para>
<para>Create Glance tables into the database :<screen><userinput>glance-manage db_sync</userinput></screen></para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Download and import <link xlink:href="http://uec-images.ubuntu.com/releases/precise/release/ubuntu-12.04-server-cloudimg-amd64.tar.gz">Ubuntu 12.04 UEC Image</link> :<screen><userinput>tar xzvf ubuntu-12.04-server-cloudimg-amd64.tar.gz
glance image-create --name="Ubuntu 12.04 UEC" --public --container-format=ovf \
--disk-format=qcow2 &lt; precise-server-cloudimg-amd64.img</userinput></screen></para>
<para>Download and import <link xlink:href="http://uec-images.ubuntu.com/releases/precise/release/ubuntu-12.04-server-cloudimg-amd64.tar.gz">Ubuntu 12.04 UEC Image</link> :<screen><userinput>
glance image-create --location http://uec-images.ubuntu.com/releases/precise/release/ubuntu-12.04-server-cloudimg-amd64.tar.gz --is-public true --disk-format qcow2 --container-format bare --name "Ubuntu 12.04 UEC"
</userinput></screen></para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Check if the image has been introduced in the index

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doc/src/docbkx/basic-install/src/basic-install_controller-keystone.xml
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@@ -64,12 +64,12 @@ echo "source novarc">>.bashrc</userinput></screen></para>
</itemizedlist>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Download the <link xlink:href="https://github.com/EmilienM/openstack-folsom-guide/blob/master/scripts/keystone-data.sh">data script</link> and fill Keystone database with datas (users,
<para>Download the <link xlink:href="https://github.com/EmilienM/openstack-folsom-guide/raw/master/scripts/keystone-data.sh">data script</link> and fill Keystone database with datas (users,
tenants, services) :<screen><userinput>./keystone-data.sh</userinput></screen></para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Download the <link
xlink:href="https://github.com/EmilienM/openstack-folsom-guide/blob/master/scripts/keystone-endpoints.sh">endpoint script</link> and create the endpoints (for projects) :<screen><userinput>./keystone-endpoints.sh</userinput></screen></para>
xlink:href="https://github.com/EmilienM/openstack-folsom-guide/raw/master/scripts/keystone-endpoints.sh">endpoint script</link> and create the endpoints (for projects) :<screen><userinput>./keystone-endpoints.sh</userinput></screen></para>
</listitem>
</orderedlist>
</para>

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doc/src/docbkx/basic-install/src/basic-install_controller-nova.xml
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@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ verbose=true</userinput></screen></para>
service nova-cert restart
service nova-consoleauth restart
service nova-scheduler restart
service novnc restart</userinput></screen></para>
service nova-novncproxy restart</userinput></screen></para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</listitem>

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doc/src/docbkx/basic-install/src/basic-install_controller-quantum.xml
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@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ service quantum-dhcp-agent restart
service quantum-l3-agent restart</userinput></screen></para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Download my <link xlink:href="https://github.com/EmilienM/openstack-folsom-guide/blob/master/scripts/quantum-networking.sh">Quantum script</link>. Before launching it, you should modify
<para>Download my <link xlink:href="https://github.com/EmilienM/openstack-folsom-guide/raw/master/scripts/quantum-networking.sh">Quantum script</link>. Before launching it, you should modify
networking informations inside the script. All is commented and you can
customize belong your needs. In this script, we actually create one
tenant network with its router, and one external network connected to

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doc/src/docbkx/openstack-install/ap_installingfolsom.xml
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@@ -418,7 +418,7 @@ signing_dirname = /tmp/keystone-signing-nova</programlisting>Populate
Restart everything.</para>
<screen><prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>cd /etc/init.d/; for i in $( ls nova-* ); do sudo service $i restart; done </userinput>
<prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>service open-iscsi restart</userinput>
<prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>service novnc restart</userinput></screen>
<prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>service nova-novncproxy restart</userinput></screen>
<para>Check the smiling
services.<screen><prompt>$</prompt> <userinput> sudo nova-manage service list</userinput></screen></para>
<programlisting>Binary Host Zone Status State Updated_At