Editorial updates to common files, including sentence-style headings and consistency/clarity edits

Partial-Bug: #1250515

backport: havana

Change-Id: I9675dffd130c8aa6343143d9806adb4e0b74a55d
author: diane fleming
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Diane Fleming
2013-11-18 10:26:49 -06:00
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/etc/openstack-dashboard/local_settings</filename>, on Ubuntu and Debian:
<filename>/etc/openstack-dashboard/local_settings.py</filename> and on openSUSE: <filename
>/usr/share/openstack-dashboard/openstack_dashboard/local/local_settings.py</filename>).
</para>
</para>
<para>The following sections describe the pros and cons of each
option as it pertains to deploying the dashboard.</para>
<section xml:id="dashboard-session-local">
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ CACHES = {
<para>You can use applications such as Memcached or Redis for external
caching. These applications offer persistence and shared storage
and are useful for small-scale deployments and/or development.
</para>
</para>
<section xml:id="dashboard-session-memcached">
<title>Memcached</title>
<para>Memcached is an high-performance and distributed memory object caching system
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ CACHES = {
</section>
</section>
<section xml:id="dashboard-session-database">
<title>Database</title>
<title>Initialize and configure the database</title>
<para>Database-backed sessions are scalable, persistent, and
can be made high-concurrency and highly-available.</para>
<para>However, database-backed sessions are one of the slower
@@ -105,7 +105,6 @@ CACHES = {
can also be a substantial undertaking and is far beyond
the scope of this documentation.</para>
<procedure>
<title>To initialize and configure the database:</title>
<step>
<para>Start the mysql command line client:</para>
<screen><prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>mysql -u root -p</userinput></screen>
@@ -173,14 +172,14 @@ No fixtures found.</computeroutput></screen>
symbolic link settings:</para>
<para>On Ubuntu:
<screen><prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>/etc/init.d/apache2 restart</userinput></screen>
</para>
</para>
<para>On Fedora/RHEL/CentOS:
<screen><prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>service httpd restart</userinput></screen>
<screen><prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>service apache2 restart</userinput></screen>
</para>
</para>
<para>On openSUSE:
<screen><prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>systemctl restart apache2.service</userinput></screen>
</para>
</para>
</step>
<step>
<para>On Ubuntu, restart the <systemitem class="service">nova-api</systemitem> service to ensure that the