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Modified punctuation and clarified a service information sentence.

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Added uniform punctuation and clarified the
"Volumes, Snapshots, and Backups" description.

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Donald Talton 2014-01-30 15:01:32 -08:00
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doc/config-reference/block-storage/section_block-storage-overview.xml
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back-end devices themselves.</para> back-end devices themselves.</para>
</listitem> </listitem>
<listitem> <listitem>
<para><systemitem class="service">cinder-backup</systemitem> <para><systemitem class="service">cinder-backup</systemitem>.
Provides a means to back up a Block Storage Volume Provides a means to back up a Block Storage Volume
to OpenStack Object Store (SWIFT).</para> to OpenStack Object Store (SWIFT).</para>
</listitem> </listitem>
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<itemizedlist> <itemizedlist>
<listitem> <listitem>
<para>The number of volumes that can be <para>The number of volumes that can be
created</para> created.</para>
</listitem> </listitem>
<listitem> <listitem>
<para>The number of snapshots that can be <para>The number of snapshots that can be
created</para> created.</para>
</listitem> </listitem>
<listitem> <listitem>
<para>The total number of GBs allowed per tenant <para>The total number of GBs allowed per tenant
(shared between snapshots and volumes)</para> (shared between snapshots and volumes).</para>
</listitem> </listitem>
</itemizedlist> </itemizedlist>
<para>You can revise the default quota values with the cinder CLI, so the limits placed by quotas are editable by admin users.</para> <para>You can revise the default quota values with the cinder CLI, so the limits placed by quotas are editable by admin users.</para>
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<para><emphasis role="bold">Volumes, Snapshots, and <para><emphasis role="bold">Volumes, Snapshots, and
Backups</emphasis>. The basic resources offered by Backups</emphasis>. The basic resources offered by
the Block Storage Service are volumes and the Block Storage Service are volumes and
snapshots, which are derived from volumes, and snapshots which are derived from volumes and
backups:</para> volume backups:</para>
<itemizedlist> <itemizedlist>
<listitem> <listitem>
<para><emphasis role="bold">Volumes</emphasis>. <para><emphasis role="bold">Volumes</emphasis>.