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Don't use 'we' 

The document used "The admin or other privileged
user must include this option during network
creation or add it later. In this case, we can
add it to the existing provider provider network.".

To use "we" in this case should be avoided.

Change-Id: Idae1b9459bbbc6452891e9864362903653927457
Closes-Bug: #1679584
(cherry picked from commit 5c91e66384)
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David Rabel 2017-04-04 11:18:28 +02:00
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doc/install-guide/source/launch-instance-networks-selfservice.rst
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@ -168,9 +168,9 @@ on at least one self-service network and a gateway on a provider network.
The provider network must include the ``router:external`` option to
enable self-service routers to use it for connectivity to external networks
such as the Internet. The ``admin`` or other privileged user must include this
option during network creation or add it later. In this case, we already
did that by providing the ``--external`` parameter when we created the
``provider`` provider network.
option during network creation or add it later. In this case, the
``router:external`` option was set by using the ``--external`` parameter
when creating the ``provider`` network.
#. On the controller node, source the ``admin`` credentials to gain access to
admin-only CLI commands: