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module001-ch005-vm-provisioning-walk-through.xml clean up

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Run on sentence corrected. Added comma and period.
theres was changed to there's since it means (there is).

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Shilla Saebi 2014-01-17 12:52:18 -05:00
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</figure> </figure>
<para>The OpenStack system copies the base image from the image <para>The OpenStack system copies the base image from the image
store to local disk which is used as the first disk of the store to local disk which is used as the first disk of the
instance (vda), having small images will result in faster start instance (vda). Having small images will result in faster start
up of your instances as less data needs to be copied across the up of your instances as less data needs to be copied across the
network. The system also creates a new empty disk image to network. The system also creates a new empty disk image to
present as the second disk (vdb). Be aware that the second disk present as the second disk (vdb). Be aware that the second disk
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</imageobject> </imageobject>
</mediaobject> </mediaobject>
</figure> </figure>
<para>Once you launch a VM in OpenStack, theres something more <para>Once you launch a VM in OpenStack, there's something more
going on in the background. To understand what's happening going on in the background. To understand what's happening
behind the Dashboard, lets take a deeper dive into OpenStack’s behind the Dashboard, lets take a deeper dive into OpenStack’s
VM provisioning. For launching a VM, you can either use VM provisioning. For launching a VM, you can either use