From 194646a4a93eb0edadfaa8e545aa522162a1ea17 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Shilla Saebi Date: Mon, 22 Dec 2014 15:07:34 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] change to section_architecture_network_focus should be are a number of moved a and as have should be has added space between autoconfiguration Change-Id: Id4696ff3bb11d591c195e30ab07253df7bdbda53 --- .../network_focus/section_architecture_network_focus.xml | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/arch-design/network_focus/section_architecture_network_focus.xml b/doc/arch-design/network_focus/section_architecture_network_focus.xml index 98e80a7ef9..fac292f2d4 100644 --- a/doc/arch-design/network_focus/section_architecture_network_focus.xml +++ b/doc/arch-design/network_focus/section_architecture_network_focus.xml @@ -7,12 +7,12 @@ Architecture Network focused OpenStack architectures have many similarities to other OpenStack architecture use cases. There - a number of very specific considerations to keep in mind when + are a number of very specific considerations to keep in mind when designing for a network-centric or network-heavy application environment. - Networks exist to serve a as medium of transporting data + Networks exist to serve as a medium of transporting data between systems. It is inevitable that an OpenStack design - have inter-dependencies with non-network portions of OpenStack + has inter-dependencies with non-network portions of OpenStack as well as on external systems. Depending on the specific workload, there may be major interactions with storage systems both within and external to the OpenStack environment. For @@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ protocols. While OpenStack was initially built with only IPv4 support, Networking now supports IPv6 and dual-stacked networks. Note that, as of the Icehouse release, this only includes - stateless address autoconfiguration but work is in + stateless address auto configuration but work is in progress to support stateless and stateful DHCPv6 as well as IPv6 floating IPs without NAT. Some workloads become possible through the use of IPv6 and IPv6 to IPv4 reverse transition