From ed97f03ec399f91d4ac656066a03d2f198868c41 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Shilla Saebi Date: Thu, 20 Feb 2014 12:21:56 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] changes to lab001-control-node a ssh to an ssh changed control to controller node Added the before OpenStack vSwitch spelling corrected changed plural on add added space in volumegroup don't needs apostrophe changed like this to following steps added : added space after . changed to do not and added perform Change-Id: I4c830b03a7d955a9f1948876cc31cac64c7dcf4d --- doc/training-guides/lab001-control-node.xml | 32 ++++++++++----------- 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/training-guides/lab001-control-node.xml b/doc/training-guides/lab001-control-node.xml index e8b714da7f..75fa3385c0 100644 --- a/doc/training-guides/lab001-control-node.xml +++ b/doc/training-guides/lab001-control-node.xml @@ -96,10 +96,10 @@ iface eth2 inet dhcp SSH from HOST - Create a SSH key pair for your Control Node. Follow the same steps as you did in the starting section of the article for your host machine. + Create an SSH key pair for your Control Node. Follow the same steps as you did in the starting section of the article for your host machine. - To SSH into Control Node from the Host Machine type the below command. + To SSH into the Control Node from the Host Machine type the below command. $ ssh control@10.10.10.51 $ sudo su @@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ iface eth2 inet dhcp Keystone - Keystone is an OpenStack project that provides Identity, Token, Catalog and Policy services for use specifically by projects in the OpenStack family.It implements OpenStack’s Identity API. + Keystone is an OpenStack project that provides Identity, Token, Catalog and Policy services for use specifically by projects in the OpenStack family. It implements OpenStack’s Identity API. Install Keystone packages: @@ -255,16 +255,16 @@ iface eth2 inet dhcp Glance - OpenStack Glance project provides services for discovering, registering, and retrieving virtual machine images. + The OpenStack Glance project provides services for discovering, registering, and retrieving virtual machine images. Glance has a RESTful API that allows querying of VM image metadata as well as retrieval of the actual image. VM images made available through Glance can be stored in a variety of locations from simple file systems to object-storage systems like the OpenStack Swift project. Glance, as with all OpenStack projects, is written with the following design guidelines in mind: - Component based architecture: Quickly add new behaviors + Component based architecture: Quickly adds new behaviors - Highly available: Scale to very serious workloads + Highly available: Scales to very serious workloads Fault tolerant: Isolated processes avoid cascading failures @@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ flavor = keystone Neutron is an OpenStack project to provide “network connectivity as a service" between interface devices (e.g., vNICs) managed by other OpenStack services (e.g., nova). - Install Neutron Server and the OpenVSwitch package collection: + Install the Neutron Server and the Open vSwitch package collection: # apt-get install -y neutron-server @@ -441,10 +441,10 @@ connection = mysql://neutronUser:neutronPass@10.10.10.51/neutronNova is written with the following design guidelines in mind - Component based architecture: Quickly add new behaviors + Component based architecture: Quickly adds new behaviors - Highly available: Scale to very serious workloads + Highly available: Scales to very serious workloads Fault-Tolerant: Isolated processes avoid cascading failures @@ -566,10 +566,10 @@ osapi_volume_listen_port=5900 Cinder is an OpenStack project to provide “block storage as a service”. - Component based architecture: Quickly add new behaviors + Component based architecture: Quickly adds new behavior - Highly available: Scale to very serious workloads + Highly available: Scales to very serious workloads Fault-Tolerant: Isolated processes avoid cascading failures @@ -578,7 +578,7 @@ osapi_volume_listen_port=5900 Recoverable: Failures should be easy to diagnose, debug, and rectify - Open Standards: Be a reference implementation for a community-driven api + Open Standards: Be a reference implementation for a community-driven API @@ -646,7 +646,7 @@ rabbit_port = 5672 - Finally, create a volumegroup and name it cinder-volumes: + Finally, create a volume group and name it cinder-volumes: # dd if=/dev/zero of=cinder-volumes bs=1 count=0 seek=2G # losetup /dev/loop2 cinder-volumes @@ -667,7 +667,7 @@ rabbit_port = 5672 - Note: Beware that this volume group gets lost after a system reboot. If you dont want to do this step again ... make sure that you save the machine state and not shut it down. + Note: Be aware that this volume group gets lost after a system reboot. If you do not want to perform this step again, make sure that you save the machine state and do not shut it down. Restart the Cinder services: @@ -686,13 +686,13 @@ rabbit_port = 5672 Horizon is the canonical implementation of OpenStack’s dashboard, which provides a web based user interface to OpenStack services including Nova, Swift, Keystone, etc. - To install Horizon, proceed like this +To install Horizon, proceed with the following steps: # apt-get install -y openstack-dashboard memcached - If you don't like the OpenStack Ubuntu Theme, you can remove it with help of the below command: + If you do not like the OpenStack Ubuntu Theme, you can remove it with help of the below command: # dpkg --purge openstack-dashboard-ubuntu-theme