14 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Sandro Tosi
aef24a1847 Typos and spellings errors in common/ dir
This is another series of typo/spelling errors fixing, in particular for
common/ dir

Change-Id: I04c0d5b2fe7d72e120b82da9039d116ad4c802cc
Closes-Bug: #1356460
2014-08-14 10:42:15 +01:00
Roger Luethi
3f850f8142 Trivial grammar fix
"Replication services ensures consistency" becomes "Replication services
ensure consistency".

Change-Id: I9870875386d552420ecf778c6084e9b8281888e9
2014-08-09 11:46:35 +02:00
Christian Berendt
b2235bf3fb Unified the syntax of the XML root element (common)
Execluded all XML files in the directory doc/common/tables because
they are autogenerated.

The XML root element of Docbook XML files should match the following
format:

<ELEMENT xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
  xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
  xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
  version="5.0"
  xml:id="THE_XML_ID_OF_THE_ELEMENT">

Change-Id: If12091be81ec8b2e6e53bfcb4c3a883a65e24736
2014-07-09 22:23:03 +02:00
Christian Berendt
8d2b198d61 Unify the XML declaration in all XML files in doc
The XML declaration should be available on the first line
in every XML file and should match the following line:

<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>

Change-Id: I29b3d4b730d7ff01c89f34b0bef60b74a858de13
2014-07-07 19:18:28 +02:00
Diane Fleming
ce1777ca55 Consistent terminology for XX-as-a-Service
Also changed "Load-Balancing-as-a-Service" to Load-Balancer-as-a-Service

Change-Id: I078cd7b4ad7f9d25c908e2c334efacf8de907e4f
author: diane fleming
2014-06-30 10:53:04 -05:00
Darren
71fb2e1d9e Minor edits to the Image Service overview section
Minor edits to the wording in the Image Service overview.

Change-Id: I2c3771955d1d2c5814e757929734d43594dcc1dc
Implements: blueprint installation-guide-improvements
2014-06-02 13:20:56 +10:00
Darren
3981735acd Edited Services sections of Admin Guide
Edit wording; changed term/description lists to variable lists as per writing
conventions

backport: none
Partial-Bug: #1251195

Change-Id: I3b7f3fedafa79ab64f75260fcd3c5daa7cbb5e34
2014-05-23 12:55:20 +10:00
Tom Fifield
ca9c7bbe27 Add a note that the glance-registry is internal
Users could be confused into thinking the glance registry
is an external-facing service. It is not, and is designed
with a security model such that it should be protected for
internal use only.

This patch adds a note to the introduction in the common section
so it will be included in multiple guides.

Change-Id: Ic540353d82c829475ac6f3455ccccdea32977a4b
Closes-Bug: 1252931
2014-04-10 13:19:30 -04:00
Matt Kassawara
2294ed15a3 Updated architecture chapter
As part of the installation guide improvement project, I performed
the following operations on the architecture chapter:

1) Added new diagrams for example architectures supported by the
   the installation guide.
2) Increased detail of node function descriptions.
3) Removed potentially confusing and overwhelming logical
   architecture diagram.
4) Clarified phrasing and wording.

The contents of this chapter rely on other portions of the guide
subject to change during this project and may need additional
updates.

Change-Id: I9b887f49a7d3ec94efc748a9056ec3a643ac7899
Partial-Bug: #1291071
Implements: blueprint networking-install-guide-improvements
2014-03-20 17:12:11 -06:00
Diane Fleming
371f556463 Heading and other consistency/clarity edits - Cloud Admin Guide
Closes-Bug: #1250515

author: diane fleming

Change-Id: Ib1755a3e10ddd348d0575b3c5e6aa1660d5f612e
backport: none
2013-11-22 11:13:21 -06:00
Diane Fleming
42b23e8c84 Edits to install guide
Closes-Bug: #1249082

Change-Id: I9f68073da5ca25867b2b8c099cce5df34f6a3eec
author: diane fleming
2013-11-10 06:43:51 +01:00
Andreas Jaeger
c7ff12d3be Fix link
The link was to an informalfigure, make it a link to the section
called "Conceptual Architecture."

Currently the text is displayed as "As shown in ???, the"

Change-Id: I2a0f0b25e80a72dd9f8a5895582284e97086eb3d
2013-10-14 20:51:12 +02:00
annegentle
20615f9395 Adds introductory text about the Image service for Install Guide
Change-Id: I93c900718bcf5c5875687d4ddd3a993da3832d71
2013-10-11 09:31:16 -05:00
Shaun McCance
f368a64810 Restructured Install Guide
Full outline finished. Keystone, Glance, and most of Nova complete

Changes to Common:
* Separate "Getting Started" content into separate files, so they can be
included individually where needed in the install guide
* separated "Keystone Concepts" so that a smaller subset of that can be
used in the install guide

Change-Id: I583349443685e3022f4c4c1893c2c07d1d2af1d5
2013-10-08 18:11:03 +11:00