diff --git a/releasenotes/notes/bug-1712935-allow-os_baremetal_api_version_env_var_to_be_latest-28c8eed24f389673.yaml b/releasenotes/notes/bug-1712935-allow-os_baremetal_api_version_env_var_to_be_latest-28c8eed24f389673.yaml
index ce93b9975..72e8dd132 100644
--- a/releasenotes/notes/bug-1712935-allow-os_baremetal_api_version_env_var_to_be_latest-28c8eed24f389673.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/bug-1712935-allow-os_baremetal_api_version_env_var_to_be_latest-28c8eed24f389673.yaml
@@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
 ---
 fixes:
   - |
-    Fix issue where doing ``export OS_BAREMETAL_API_VERSION=latest`` would
-    cause the ``openstack baremetal`` commands to fail.  See `bug 1712935
-    <https://bugs.launchpad.net/ironic/+bug/1712935>`_.
+    ``openstack baremetal`` commands no longer fail when specifying ``latest``
+    as the API version (via ``--os-baremetal-api-version`` or
+    ``export OS_BAREMETAL_API_VERSION=latest``). For more details, see
+    `bug 1712935 <https://bugs.launchpad.net/ironic/+bug/1712935>`_.
diff --git a/releasenotes/notes/deprecate-ironic-cli-686b7a238ddf3e25.yaml b/releasenotes/notes/deprecate-ironic-cli-686b7a238ddf3e25.yaml
index 0b211b00a..9b743a2e8 100644
--- a/releasenotes/notes/deprecate-ironic-cli-686b7a238ddf3e25.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/deprecate-ironic-cli-686b7a238ddf3e25.yaml
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 ---
 deprecations:
   - |
-    The ``ironic`` CLI has been deprecated and will be removed in the
-    S* release.  Please use the ``openstack baremetal`` CLI instead.
+    The ``ironic`` command line interface (``ironic`` commands) is deprecated
+    and will be removed in the OpenStack S* release.  Please use the
+    ``openstack baremetal`` command line interface instead.
diff --git a/releasenotes/notes/fix-token-with-vhosts-5d0a6d53e807fa5e.yaml b/releasenotes/notes/fix-token-with-vhosts-5d0a6d53e807fa5e.yaml
index 9c0e2bd0a..e673d6c43 100644
--- a/releasenotes/notes/fix-token-with-vhosts-5d0a6d53e807fa5e.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/fix-token-with-vhosts-5d0a6d53e807fa5e.yaml
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 ---
 fixes:
   - |
-    Fixed a bug where ironicclient instantiated with keystone token and
-    ironic API endpoint could not access ironic API that has a virtual host
-    in its endpoint (like "http://hostname/baremetal").
-    For more details see `bug 1721599 <https://launchpad.net/bugs/1721599>`_.
+    Fixes a bug where the client could not access the ironic API service when
+    the client was instantiated with a keystone token and an ironic API
+    endpoint that included a virtual host (such as "http://hostname/baremetal").
+    For more details, see `bug 1721599 <https://launchpad.net/bugs/1721599>`_.
diff --git a/releasenotes/notes/osc-plugin-set-unset-target-raid-config-9a1cecb5620eafda.yaml b/releasenotes/notes/osc-plugin-set-unset-target-raid-config-9a1cecb5620eafda.yaml
index 65dc6ce5f..5b43bcdb7 100644
--- a/releasenotes/notes/osc-plugin-set-unset-target-raid-config-9a1cecb5620eafda.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/osc-plugin-set-unset-target-raid-config-9a1cecb5620eafda.yaml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 ---
 fixes:
-  - No longer emits the incorrect warning "Please specify what to set/unset"
-    when only the --target-raid-config is specified in the
-    ``openstack baremetal node set/unset`` command.
+  - No longer emits the incorrect warning "Please specify what to set"
+    (or "unset") when only the ``--target-raid-config`` is specified in the
+    ``openstack baremetal node set`` (or ``unset``) command.
diff --git a/releasenotes/notes/remove-deprecated-osc-cmd-6dc980299d2fbde4.yaml b/releasenotes/notes/remove-deprecated-osc-cmd-6dc980299d2fbde4.yaml
index 264912440..b8467e387 100644
--- a/releasenotes/notes/remove-deprecated-osc-cmd-6dc980299d2fbde4.yaml
+++ b/releasenotes/notes/remove-deprecated-osc-cmd-6dc980299d2fbde4.yaml
@@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
 ---
 upgrade:
   - |
-    The following previously deprecated commands were removed:
+    These previously deprecated commands were removed and are no longer
+    available:
 
     * ``openstack baremetal delete``
     * ``openstack baremetal list``
@@ -9,7 +10,7 @@ upgrade:
     * ``openstack baremetal set``
     * ``openstack baremetal unset``
 
-    The equivalent commands are:
+    Instead, use these corresponding equivalent commands:
 
     * ``openstack baremetal node delete``
     * ``openstack baremetal node list``
@@ -17,8 +18,10 @@ upgrade:
     * ``openstack baremetal node set``
     * ``openstack baremetal node unset``
 
-    The support of creating a single node by ``openstack baremetal create``
-    is removed, the equivalent command is ``openstack baremetal node create``.
-    The only valid usage of ``openstack baremetal create`` now is to create
-    various resources (chassis, node, port, portgroup, etc.) from resource
-    file(s).
+  - |
+    Support for creating a single node via ``openstack baremetal create`` had
+    been previously deprecated; it is now no longer available.
+    Instead, use the equivalent command ``openstack baremetal node
+    create``.  The only valid usage of ``openstack baremetal create`` is to
+    create various resources (chassis, nodes, port groups, and ports) from
+    resource files.