diff --git a/security-guide/section_case-studies-api-endpoints.xml b/security-guide/section_case-studies-api-endpoints.xml index 016e0b7c..8af29278 100644 --- a/security-guide/section_case-studies-api-endpoints.xml +++ b/security-guide/section_case-studies-api-endpoints.xml @@ -19,8 +19,8 @@ obtains certificates issued by this CA and configures the services within both the public and management security domains to use these certificates. Since Alice's OpenStack - deployment exists entirely on a disconnected from the Internet - network, she makes sure to remove all default CA bundles that + deployment exists entirely on a network disconnected from the + Internet, she makes sure to remove all default CA bundles that contain external public CA providers to ensure the OpenStack services only accept client certificates issued by her agency's CA. Alice has registered all of the services in the