Update patch set 2

Patch Set 2:

(5 comments)

Hi Jimmy,

Thank you for the review!

I fixed most of your comments, I added one follow-up comment and one question in line. Please check and let me know what you think.

Thanks,
Ildikó

Patch-set: 2

5bf7325e56f4dd45b1deaa50bb7c3f3881b84e4c

@@ -23,6 +23,30 @@
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+      "author": {
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+      },
+      "writtenOn": "2021-02-24T12:57:25Z",
+      "side": 1,
+      "message": "Done",
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@@ -40,6 +64,24 @@
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+        "filename": "doc/source/activities_and_processes.rst",
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+      "author": {
+        "id": 9562
+      },
+      "writtenOn": "2021-02-24T12:57:25Z",
+      "side": 1,
+      "message": "I removed the \"three forces\" term from the earlier chapter where it was mentioned as it wasn\u0027t really defined there either. I don\u0027t think that we use it enough that would require to introduce a new term that readers need to remember and digest as it can be distracting.\n\nI also switched out \u0027developers\u0027 to \u0027contributors\u0027 to be more inclusive. In previous chapters I even highlighted both technical and non-technical contributors, which I should probably do here too. And there might be more angles that we want to add as the book forming that we can do easily this way.",
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+      "serverId": "4a232e18-c5a9-48ee-94c0-e04e7cca6543",
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@@ -57,6 +99,24 @@
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+        "filename": "doc/source/activities_and_processes.rst",
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+      "author": {
+        "id": 9562
+      },
+      "writtenOn": "2021-02-24T12:57:25Z",
+      "side": 1,
+      "message": "Done",
+      "parentUuid": "33bb9540_4ab1e7f0",
+      "revId": "5bf7325e56f4dd45b1deaa50bb7c3f3881b84e4c",
+      "serverId": "4a232e18-c5a9-48ee-94c0-e04e7cca6543",
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@@ -74,6 +134,24 @@
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+        "filename": "doc/source/activities_and_processes.rst",
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+      "author": {
+        "id": 9562
+      },
+      "writtenOn": "2021-02-24T12:57:25Z",
+      "side": 1,
+      "message": "Done",
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+      "revId": "5bf7325e56f4dd45b1deaa50bb7c3f3881b84e4c",
+      "serverId": "4a232e18-c5a9-48ee-94c0-e04e7cca6543",
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@@ -90,6 +168,24 @@
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+      "author": {
+        "id": 9562
+      },
+      "writtenOn": "2021-02-24T12:57:25Z",
+      "side": 1,
+      "message": "I could add the link to the related Wikipedia article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Benevolent_dictator_for_life ?",
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