Update patch set 2

Patch Set 2:

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Hi, I checked the text and made some suggestions, but feel free to ignore them if they're unreasonable. :D

Patch-set: 2
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Gerrit User 22534 2020-04-21 15:36:42 +00:00 committed by Gerrit Code Review
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