Merge "Minor corrections in cinder-guide documentation."

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Zuul 2018-07-27 07:01:13 +00:00 committed by Gerrit Code Review
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Overview
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Cinder can be deploying using Kolla and supports the following storage
Cinder can be deployed using Kolla and supports the following storage
backends:
* ceph
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LVM
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When using the ``lvm`` backend, a volume group will need to be created on each
When using the ``lvm`` backend, a volume group should be created on each
storage node. This can either be a real physical volume or a loopback mounted
file for development. Use ``pvcreate`` and ``vgcreate`` to create the volume
group. For example with the devices ``/dev/sdb`` and ``/dev/sdc``:
@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ Create a volume as follows:
.. end
Verify it is available. If it says "error" here something went wrong during
Verify it is available. If it says "error", then something went wrong during
LVM creation of the volume.
.. code-block:: console
@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ Attach the volume to a server using:
.. end
Check the console log added the disk:
Check the console log to verify the disk addition:
.. code-block:: console
@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ targeted for nova compute role.
Cinder backend with external iSCSI storage
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
In order to use external storage system (like one from EMC or NetApp)
In order to use external storage system (like the ones from EMC or NetApp)
the following parameter must be specified in ``globals.yml``:
.. code-block:: yaml