Corrected few grammatical nitpics

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Madhu Mohan Nelemane 2015-11-18 12:19:38 +01:00
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@ -130,10 +130,10 @@ This is designed to balance the need for a smooth upgrade, against having to
keep maintaining the compatibility code to make that upgrade possible.
We talk about this approach as users consuming the stable branch.
In addition, we also support users upgrading from the master branch.
Technically, between any two between any two commits within the
same release cycle. In certain cases, when crossing release boundaries, you
must upgrade to the stable branch, before then upgrading to the tip of master.
In addition, we also support users upgrading from the master branch,
technically, between any two commits within the same release cycle.
In certain cases, when crossing release boundaries, you
must upgrade to the stable branch, before upgrading to the tip of master.
This is to support those that are doing some level of
"Continuous Deployment" from the tip of master into production.
Many of the public cloud provides running OpenStack use this approach so they
@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ rare cases, the feature no longer works, is not tested, and no one is stepping
forward to maintain that feature, the best option can be to remove that
feature.
When we remove features, we need warn users by first marking those features as
When we remove features, we need to warn users by first marking those features as
deprecated, before we finally remove the feature. The idea is to get feedback
on how important the feature is to our user base. Where a feature is important
we work with the whole community to find a path forward for those users.
@ -219,7 +219,7 @@ compatibility with third party APIs inside the Nova tree.
As such, all new efforts should instead focus on external projects that
provide third party compatibility on top of the Nova API. Where needed, we
will work this those projects to extending the Nova API such that its
will work with those projects to extend the Nova API such that its
possible to add that functionality on top of the Nova API. However, we do
not intend to add API calls for those services to persist third party API
specific information in the Nova database. Instead we want to focus on
@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ Scalability
Our mission includes the text "massively scalable". Lets discuss what that
means.
Nova has three main axises of scale: Number of API requests, number of compute
Nova has three main axes of scale: Number of API requests, number of compute
nodes and number of active instances.
In many cases the number of compute nodes and active instances are so closely
related, you rarely need to consider those separately.
@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ be considered.
We intend Nova to be usable for both small and massive deployments.
Where small involves 1-10 hypervisors and massive deployments are single
regions with greater than 10,000 hypervisors. That should be seen as our
current goal not an upper limit.
current goal, not an upper limit.
There are some features that would not scale well for either the small scale
or the very large scale. Ideally we would not accept these features, but if
@ -267,10 +267,10 @@ of classic Infrastructure-as-a-service clouds. A large pool of compute
resources that people can consume in a self-service way.
Nova is not currently optimized for dealing with a larger number of requests
for compute resources compared with the amount of compute resource thats
for compute resources compared with the amount of compute resources
currently available.
We generally assume a level of spare capacity is maintained for future
requests. This is needed for users that want to quickly scale out, and extra
We generally assume that a level of spare capacity is maintained for future
requests. This is needed for users who want to quickly scale out, and extra
capacity becomes available again as users scale in.
While spare capacity is also not required, we are not optimizing for a
system that aims to run at 100% capacity at all times.