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with frequent development milestones. You can find a link to the
current development release schedule <link xlink:href=
"https://wiki.openstack.org/wiki/Releases">here</link>.
The Release Cycle is made of four major stages.</para>
The Release Cycle is made of four major stages:</para>
<figure>
<title>Various Projects under OpenStack</title>
<mediaobject>
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questions and answers are also covered here.</para>
<para><guilabel>Core Projects Overview</guilabel></para>
<para>Let's take a dive into some of the technical aspects of
OpenStack. Its scalability and flexibility are a few of the
OpenStack. Its scalability and flexibility are just some of the
awesome features that make it a rock-solid cloud computing
platform. The OpenStack core projects serve the community and its
demands.</para>
<para>Being a cloud computing platform, OpenStack consists of many
core and incubated projects which makes it really good
as an IaaS cloud computing platform/Operating System. But the
following points are the main components of OpenStack that are
necessary to be present in the cloud to call it an OpenStack
as an IaaS cloud computing platform/Operating System. The
following points are the main components
necessary to call it an OpenStack
Cloud.</para>
<para><guimenu>Components of OpenStack</guimenu></para>
<para>OpenStack has a modular architecture with various code names