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Fixes typos and updates Keystone concepts image

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This patch fixes a number of typos and generally cleans
up the keystone concepts image in the install-guide.

Change-Id: I437600288e3ab181668b55493451a0b4ef5dd314
Closes-Bug: #1281775
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Rhys Oxenham 2014-02-19 18:07:23 +01:00
parent f108408747
commit 939b1eebe1
2 changed files with 23 additions and 23 deletions
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