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Operations Per Second (<glossterm>IOPS</glossterm>)
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
<para>Server hardware is evaluated around four conflicting
dimensions.</para>
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is important to consider the networking implications
on API availability. In order to ensure that the APIs,
and potentially other services in the cloud are highly
available, we recommend you design load balancing
available, we recommend you design a load balancing
solution within the network architecture to
accommodate for these requirements.</para>
</listitem>
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</section>
<section xml:id="network-focused-workloads">
<title>Network-focused workloads</title>
<para>In a network-focused OpenStack cloud some design choices can
<para>In a network-focused OpenStack cloud, some design choices can
improve the performance of these types of workloads.
Network-focused workloads have extreme demands on network
bandwidth and services that require specialized consideration