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<partintro>
<para>
Designing an OpenStack cloud is a great achievement. It requires a
robust understanding of the requirements and needs of the cloud
robust understanding of the requirements and needs of the cloud's
users to determine the best possible configuration to meet them.
OpenStack provides a great deal of flexibility to achieve your
needs, and this part of the book aims to shine light on many of the
decisions you will need to make during the process.
decisions you need to make during the process.
</para>
<para>To design, deploy, and configure OpenStack, administrators
must understand the logical architecture. A diagram can help
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Identity Service and individual services interact with each
other through public APIs, except where privileged
administrator commands are necessary. The diagram shows the
most common, but not the only, logical architecture for an
most common, but not the only logical architecture for an
OpenStack cloud.</para>
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</partintro>