Fix grammatical errors

Change-Id: I415c57c560778553299ef57e66f591a26cd15bb5
Closes-Bug: #1342867
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Mark Vanderwiel
2014-07-16 14:36:08 -05:00
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The data generated and stored in private clouds is normally owned by the operator of the
cloud, who is able to deploy technologies such as data loss prevention (DLP) protection,
file inspection, deep packet inspection and prescriptive firewalling. In contrast, privacy
is one of the primary barriers to adoption for the public cloud, as many of these controls
do not exist.</para>
is one of the primary barriers for the adoption of public cloud infrastructures, as many of
the previously mentioned controls do not exist.</para>
</section>
<section xml:id="security-boundaries-and-threats-idp116736">
<title>Outbound attacks and reputational risk</title>