Grammar/Style changes to OpenStack Security Guide

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Sriram Subramanian
2014-07-14 13:55:38 -07:00
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<title>Bob's public cloud</title>
<para>
Because Bob must support authentication for the general
public, he decides to use use user name and password
authentication. He has concerns about brute force attacks
public, he decides to use authentication based on a user name and password.
He has concerns about brute force attacks
attempting to crack user passwords, so he also uses an
external authentication extension that throttles the number of
failed login attempts. Bob's management network is separate