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Shilla Saebi
2014-07-18 16:03:43 -04:00
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doc/training-guides/basic-install-guide/lab001-control-node.xml
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<note>
<para>It is advised to take regular snapshots of the Virtual Box
Virtual Machines (controller node) after each section. This will
help you to save your session and revert back to it in case you
help you save your session and revert back to it in case you
break something while deploying OpenStack.</para>
</note>
<para><guilabel>controller node</guilabel></para>
<para>Start your controller node the one you setup in previous
<para>Start your controller node the one you setup in the previous
section.</para>
<para><emphasis role="bold">Preparing Ubuntu
13.04/12.04</emphasis></para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>After you install Ubuntu Server, go in sudo mode</para>
<para>After you install Ubuntu Server, go into sudo mode</para>
<screen><prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>sudo su</userinput></screen>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
<filename>/etc/network/interfaces</filename> file</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>Open <filename>/etc/network/interfaces</filename> and edit
<para>Open <filename>/etc/network/interfaces</filename> and edit the
file as mentioned:</para>
<programlisting># This file describes the network interfaces available on your system
# and how to activate them. For more information, see interfaces(5).
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ iface eth2 inet dhcp</programlisting>
<screen><prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>ifconfig</userinput></screen>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>You should see the expected network interface cards having
<para>You should see the expected network interface cards with
the required IP Addresses.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
@@ -118,11 +118,11 @@ iface eth2 inet dhcp</programlisting>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>Create an SSH key pair for your Control Node. Follow the
same steps as you did in the starting section of the article
same steps as you did in the begin of the article
for your host machine.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>To SSH into the Control Node from the Host Machine type
<para>To SSH into the Control Node from the Host Machine, type
the below command.</para>
<screen><prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>ssh control@10.10.10.51</userinput></screen>
<screen><prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>sudo su</userinput></screen>
@@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ iface eth2 inet dhcp</programlisting>
<screen><prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>apt-get install -y rabbitmq-server</userinput></screen>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Install NTP service:</para>
<para>Install the NTP service:</para>
<screen><prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>apt-get install -y ntp</userinput></screen>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ iface eth2 inet dhcp</programlisting>
Identity API.</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>Install Keystone packages:</para>
<para>Install the Keystone packages:</para>
<screen><prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>apt-get install -y keystone</userinput></screen>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -553,7 +553,7 @@ osapi_volume_listen_port=5900</programlisting>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
<para><emphasis role="bold">Cinder</emphasis></para>
<para>Cinder is an OpenStack project to provide “block storage as a
<para>Cinder is an OpenStack project that provides “block storage as a
service”.</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
@@ -660,7 +660,7 @@ rabbit_port = 5672</programlisting>
<screen><prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>cd /etc/init.d/; for i in $( ls cinder-* ); do service $i restart; done</userinput></screen>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Verify if Cinder services are running:</para>
<para>Verify that the Cinder services are running:</para>
<screen><prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>cd /etc/init.d/; for i in $( ls cinder-* ); do service $i status; done</userinput></screen>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>