(doc) Fixed references to FIXED_RANGE_V6

In the 'Private Network Addressing' section of the doc,
there are references to FIXED_RANGE when referring to V6
networks.  These have been changed to FIXED_RANGE_V6.

Also fixed a few typos and grammatical errors when
giving the doc a quick read-through looking for more
references to FIXED_RANGE.

Change-Id: Iaa530c476ce2b36a3f616945ddd2e24fa599a16c
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Peter Stachowski 2016-11-21 20:36:31 +00:00
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An important part of the DevStack experience is networking that works
by default for created guests. This might not be optimal for your
particular testing environment, so this document tries it's best to
particular testing environment, so this document tries its best to
explain what's going on.
Defaults
@ -17,9 +17,9 @@ If you don't specify any configuration you will get the following:
* a floating ip range of 172.24.4.0/24 with the gateway of 172.24.4.1
* the demo project configured with fixed ips on a subnet allocated from
the 10.0.0.0/22 range
* a ``br-ex`` interface controlled by neutron for all it's networking
* a ``br-ex`` interface controlled by neutron for all its networking
(this is not connected to any physical interfaces).
* DNS resolution for guests based on the resolv.conf for you host
* DNS resolution for guests based on the resolv.conf for your host
* an ip masq rule that allows created guests to route out
This creates an environment which is isolated to the single
@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ updates. Tempest tests will work in this environment.
Locally Accessible Guests
=========================
If you want to make you guests accessible other machines on your
If you want to make you guests accessible from other machines on your
network, we have to connect ``br-ex`` to a physical interface.
Dedicated Guest Interface
@ -109,8 +109,8 @@ not subnetpools are in use.
For IPv4, ``FIXED_RANGE`` and ``SUBNETPOOL_PREFIX_V4`` will just default to
the value of ``IPV4_ADDRS_SAFE_TO_USE`` directly.
For IPv6, ``FIXED_RANGE`` will default to the first /64 of the value of
For IPv6, ``FIXED_RANGE_V6`` will default to the first /64 of the value of
``IPV6_ADDRS_SAFE_TO_USE``. If ``IPV6_ADDRS_SAFE_TO_USE`` is /64 or smaller,
``FIXED_RANGE`` will just use the value of that directly.
``FIXED_RANGE_V6`` will just use the value of that directly.
``SUBNETPOOL_PREFIX_V6`` will just default to the value of
``IPV6_ADDRS_SAFE_TO_USE`` directly.