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Merge "Fix typos in persona descriptions."

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doc/contributor-guide/source/ux-ui-guidelines/ux-personas/cloud-ops.rst
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@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ Rey performs the following tasks very frequently:
including backup, disaster recovery, and platform services.
* Usage tracking: Tracks the use that App Developers, Project Owners, and
Domain operators make of the cloud and optimizes the services accordingly.
Domain Operators make of the cloud and optimizes the services accordingly.
* Update: Performs updates and verification of the OpenStack cloud.
@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ and updating the OpenStack cloud. The following pain point examples
highlight the cases where progress can be impeded. This enables you to
anticipate and compensate when preparing a project:
Rey has trouble finding information to help triage issues that can
* Rey has trouble finding information to help triage issues that can
prevent the cloud from running:
"New users do not have the flexibility to spend weeks delving into
@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ prevent the cloud from running:
significantly more difficult time trying to understand practical
uses of OpenStack functionality."
Consistency between projects slows down progress:
* Inconsistency between projects slows down progress:
"All projects should strive to use the same standards—in code,
libraries used, file formats, and documentation. [We need] consistency
@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ Consistency between projects slows down progress:
"It really boils down to having OpenStack act more like a single
initiative, versus a collection of projects."
Building a community that listens and takes on feedback is also a goal:
* Building a community that listens and takes on feedback is also a goal:
"There’s still a bit of a gap between developers and operators.
Although that is narrowing, understanding operators’ pains in

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@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ Adrian performs the following tasks very frequently:
processes, and the end users when recommending and installing cloud
instances.
* Cloud planing: Defines and plans the cloud while considering hardware,
* Cloud planning: Defines and plans the cloud while considering hardware,
platform choices, services, and scale.
Key information
@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ important for the usability of your OpenStack development. Within a small
organization, such as Rifkom or Nikishi University, Adrian might be required
to assume some roles and responsibilities of a Cloud Operator or, more
rarely, a Domain Operator. Within a larger organization, like CNBB
Securities, Adrian's tasks are performed by the team planing and implementing
Securities, Adrian's tasks are performed by the team planning and implementing
the cloud instances.
Your development